I'm Critical
On how I receive statements
Permanent ink
I went to Japan for college
In California
I applied for an internship
With a Japanese man
Studying science materials
He is an r&d phD
Now I am an artist
Permanent stains in time affect life
Over the universe
Does not exist a degree
No university
Yet permanent adjustment
To receive, speech, from another?
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