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I'M Breaking Up With You

For the smiles you brought, I am grateful, The times we shared, I will never forget. But the lies you spoke will haunt me, And your cheating you should forever regret. Unlike you, I know when time is up, When to let go instead of lying. So now it is time to bid you adieu, For I am tired of trying.

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Skat A

Date: 6/20/2014 6:02:00 PM

Holly, Congratulations, awesome breaking up poem....... SKAT

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/20/2014 7:00:00 AM

Oh I like this break up, well done Holly ! :)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/19/2014 8:23:00 AM

Congratulations, Holly, on a well-deserved, big win! Excellent, clever write that I thoroughly enjoyed! Warm regards.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/19/2014 6:48:00 AM

Congratulations on a fine win in Breaking up contest, Holly

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/19/2014 1:08:00 AM

Hello Holly, this was very good..... Congratulations, and thank you so much for enjoying, my contest. I enjoyed every poem, on my Breaking up contest. I can sit here, and say I truly enjoyed every entry, even the few that chose not to follow my rules... LOL, Love LINDA

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/18/2014 4:09:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Holly :) - I choose your first very well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Faye Gibson

Date: 6/16/2014 7:45:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup, Holly. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. Enjoy!

Brittany Larson

Date: 6/16/2014 12:54:00 PM

Very nice poem. I can feel pain in this one.

Skat A

Date: 6/15/2014 7:55:00 PM

Hi Holly, this is a sweet entry for the break up contest, wishing you luck, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Tim Smith

Date: 6/15/2014 6:24:00 PM

Nice break up Holly...hugs Tim

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/15/2014 6:06:00 PM

Holly,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@