Greg Hoffman Poet Free verse

I'M Breaking Up With You

My Dearest Linda,

Time has come for us to play a different game
You deserve better than this life,this note,me
The world isn't wrong about us,I'm what's wrong with us
No longer can I shoulder the pain that I cause you
Breaking up with you is something I never thought I'd do
For once in my life I have to do the right thing
My heart is no more than an empty vessel
I promise you will never see me again,goodbye love




I'm breaking up with you contest/Poet Destroyer A
submitted by Greg Hoffman
6/14/14

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Eve Roper September 6, 2015 at 4:09 PM Good pen, Greg, and congratulations being featured on the Soup home page. Hugs Eve

Robert Lindley June 22, 2014 at 1:38 PM Congrats on your great win my friend!!!!! Greg Hoffman June 22, 2014 at 7:20 PM Thank you and congrats on your fine poem and win.The last line I really liked

Skat A June 20, 2014 at 5:55 PM Greg, Congratulations..... Awesome break-up poem.... Love ~SKAT~

Casarah Nance June 19, 2014 at 9:44 PM Hey there, what a it's not you it's me kind of poem, great way to get a winner, well done! Greg Hoffman June 23, 2014 at 2:51 PM Thank you and thanks for commenting

Poet Destroyer A June 19, 2014 at 2:19 PM Thank you for the reply Greg..Linda

Pandita Sietesantos June 19, 2014 at 7:14 AM Congratulations, Greg, on a well-deserved, big win! Excellent, clever write that I thoroughly enjoyed! Warm regards. Greg Hoffman June 19, 2014 at 9:49 AM Thank you and Congratulations right back at you

Dr.Ram Mehta June 19, 2014 at 6:46 AM Congratulations on a fine win in Breaking up contest, Greg Greg Hoffman June 19, 2014 at 9:50 AM Thank you and thanks for the comment

Poet Destroyer A June 19, 2014 at 12:57 AM So much fun Greg, .. Congratulations, and thank you so much for enjoying, my contest. I enjoyed every poem, on my Breaking up contest. I can sit here, and say I truly enjoyed every entry, even the few that chose not to follow my rules... LOL, Love LINDA Greg Hoffman June 19, 2014 at 10:14 AM Thank you,I liked the topic.I found Poetry Soup a couple of weeks ago and think I am really going to like it.Lots of different topics and forms of poetry that really makes you think