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I'M Breaking Up With You

My Dearest Linda,

Time has come for us to play a different game
You deserve better than this life,this note,me
The world isn't wrong about us,I'm what's wrong with us
No longer can I shoulder the pain that I cause you
Breaking up with you is something I never thought I'd do
For once in my life I have to do the right thing
My heart is no more than an empty vessel
I promise you will never see me again,goodbye love




I'm breaking up with you contest/Poet Destroyer A
submitted by Greg Hoffman
6/14/14

Copyright © Greg Hoffman | Year Posted 2014

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Eve Roper Date: 9/6/2015 4:09:00 PM Good pen, Greg, and congratulations being featured on the Soup home page. Hugs Eve Login to Reply

Robert Lindley Date: 6/22/2014 1:38:00 PM Congrats on your great win my friend!!!!! Login to Reply Greg Hoffman Date: 6/22/2014 7:20:00 PM Thank you and congrats on your fine poem and win.The last line I really liked

Skat A Date: 6/20/2014 5:55:00 PM Greg, Congratulations..... Awesome break-up poem.... Love ~SKAT~ Login to Reply

Casarah Nance Date: 6/19/2014 9:44:00 PM Hey there, what a it's not you it's me kind of poem, great way to get a winner, well done! Login to Reply Greg Hoffman Date: 6/23/2014 2:51:00 PM Thank you and thanks for commenting

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/19/2014 2:19:00 PM Thank you for the reply Greg..Linda Login to Reply

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 6/19/2014 7:14:00 AM Congratulations, Greg, on a well-deserved, big win! Excellent, clever write that I thoroughly enjoyed! Warm regards. Login to Reply Greg Hoffman Date: 6/19/2014 9:49:00 AM Thank you and Congratulations right back at you

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 6/19/2014 6:46:00 AM Congratulations on a fine win in Breaking up contest, Greg Login to Reply Greg Hoffman Date: 6/19/2014 9:50:00 AM Thank you and thanks for the comment

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/19/2014 12:57:00 AM So much fun Greg, .. Congratulations, and thank you so much for enjoying, my contest. I enjoyed every poem, on my Breaking up contest. I can sit here, and say I truly enjoyed every entry, even the few that chose not to follow my rules... LOL, Love LINDA Login to Reply Greg Hoffman Date: 6/19/2014 10:14:00 AM Thank you,I liked the topic.I found Poetry Soup a couple of weeks ago and think I am really going to like it.Lots of different topics and forms of poetry that really makes you think