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Im as free as a bird, but i cant seem to fly

Im free as a bird,
But i cant seem to fly...
Taking off is tiring,
Yet i am still trying...
I am still deciding 
If i should take off, 
Or if i should stay,
Forever wanting
Forever needing,
Just a little bit more
Than what my soul aches for...

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Beata Agustin

Date: 2/23/2025 3:45:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 2/21/2025 1:12:00 AM

Let your heart fly free as a bird, and keep writing your poetic words. Welcome to PoetrySoup Rin Tim… Beryl