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I'M Alone I Am

I'm alone I am;
gone he is.

I'm still alive I found out;
I'm pacing myself.

Doin' the best I can.
I can't do more than I can I can't.

The time slip away sure does.

introspectionlifelossfree verse

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Poet Destroyer A

August 25, 2013 at 8:03 AM

Good morning Judith, ,CONGRATULATIONS!!! on having your poem Featured on the soups home page. enjoy your coming week. Always & Forever * Linda

Judith Angell Meyer

August 25, 2013 at 10:56 AM

Good morning to you too Poet Destroyer :-) Thank you for stopping by and taking the time to comment. I will enjoy my week to come. I wish the same for you. ~J~

Skat A

August 24, 2013 at 6:15 PM

Hi Judith, congratulations, on your featured poem of the week. Take Care ~SKAT~ :-)

Judith Angell Meyer

August 25, 2013 at 10:55 AM

Thank you "Skat" ... interesting name :-) Nice of you to take the time to comment. ~J~

Derrick Burton

January 3, 2009 at 6:48 AM

beautiful and deep, filled with life and missing.

Margaret Okubo

December 31, 2008 at 5:11 AM

Great write with such an easy flow. However you are never alone as God walks beside you always. Blessings dear friend.

Vince Suzadail Jr.

December 30, 2008 at 8:18 PM

An emptiness in this one, a touch of melancholy. Vince

Mohammad Yamin

October 28, 2008 at 6:04 PM

A beautiful write -full of anguish and pain resulting from someone having gone. It touches the heart. Powerful expression. It reminds me of a verse of great eighteenth century poet Mirza Ghalib which I have translated thus: Ghalib scale the anguish's sphere. The event is unbearable but life dear. -Mohammad

Sharon Winter

October 28, 2008 at 3:45 PM

Oh Judith, this is just plain sad. Yes, it is awful he is gone, and I am so sorry for such a loss. I bet the best you can, is an awful lot more than you realize. As far as time goes, yes, it slips by way too fast. Sending warm hugs your way. Love, Shar xoxo

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