Ann Gilmour Poet Tanka

I'M Almost Dead

So thirsty am I
growing up towards the sky
my roots they are dry
shrivelled buds are almost dead
Heavy rain I drown instead

Written 25th September 2022

Contest BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CONTEST
Sponsor Brian Strand
5th PLACE

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Sam Kauffman October 6, 2022 at 10:11 AM Ann, congratulations on your win with this winsome tanka. We do need the refreshment of life giving water. You have so eloquently articulated that in your poem. It is so visual. Sending you the blessings of rain! Ann Gilmour October 16, 2022 at 6:12 AM Bless you dear Sam and thanks for your great comments they are always a joy to read my friend. I do hope you are well and thank you so much. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Shirley Hawkins October 2, 2022 at 4:51 AM Congratulations, Ann. So few words that say it all. I enjoyed reading it, Thank you. Tke care, Shirley Ann Gilmour October 16, 2022 at 6:10 AM Dear Shirley so glad you enjoyed reading my poem and thank you so much for your visit. I hope you are well. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Barbara Barry-Nishanian September 30, 2022 at 2:55 PM Must learn about a,TANKA. This was fantastic! What a surprise ending. I am so glad you were a winner. Well deserved. Ann Gilmour October 16, 2022 at 6:09 AM Thank you so much Barbara for your lovely comments, so kind of you and I really appreciate your visit. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Anne-Lise Andresen September 26, 2022 at 12:52 PM - Congratulations on your great win, Ann :) - hugs Ann Gilmour September 29, 2022 at 8:40 AM Dear Sunshine how lovely to hear from you and I hope you are well. Thank you so much for your kind words. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Christuraj Alex September 25, 2022 at 8:44 PM Capturing title and very powerful Tanka. Congratulations! Ann Gilmour September 29, 2022 at 8:39 AM Many thanks Christuraj for your congrats and your most encouraging words ~ really appreciate them. Kindest thoughts Ann xx