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I'm a Three

Born too austere, even dear ones her sneer evoked. *Birthday is July 14. 7 + 1 + 4 = 12 so 1 + 2 = 3 Written September 28, 2014

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Date: 10/7/2014 2:49:00 PM
Genius way you have chosen to let us know your birth day. Congrats on your win. Sorry for late. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 10/6/2014 6:05:00 PM
Thank you for the smile you put on my face, Carolyn. Never heard of this form, but I love its contents! Congrats on a lovely win. // paul
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Date: 10/6/2014 12:17:00 PM
Congratulations on this fine entry winning Carolyn. I agree, we think alike as I said we are kindred spirits. Thank you for your comment about my poem too. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 10/4/2014 4:16:00 PM
I am not familiar with this form, but I love what you did with it. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/4/2014 12:05:00 PM
Stopping back with my congratulations.....hugs Tim
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Date: 10/4/2014 10:51:00 AM
And back wid huge congrats Carolyn on this lovely winning poem in the new form!
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Date: 10/4/2014 8:13:00 AM
Congratulations Carolyn, this is a neat form well executed, thank you for the education. A great win.
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Date: 10/4/2014 7:45:00 AM
Brilliant little humor poem Carolyn. I can imagine how difficult this would be yet you did a job. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/4/2014 5:50:00 AM
Enjoyed your humor, Carolyn, congrats on the win,
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Date: 10/4/2014 4:08:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Carolyn:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/4/2014 1:51:00 AM
I am not crazy for this form, but you did it to perfection, Carolyn. Congrats on your win! You have a great number too!!
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Date: 10/4/2014 5:28:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. This form seemed best to me as a "three." I did check out the kimo and sijo, but found no inspiration there. Thanks again, Carolyn
Date: 9/28/2014 7:45:00 AM
Ah never seen this form before. You are a wonderful 3 and it is a pleasure to read and know you. three cheers :)
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Date: 9/28/2014 6:37:00 AM
Beautiful and rich..a perfect three....hugs Tim
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Date: 9/28/2014 6:15:00 AM
love the humour here Carolyn and the form never seen it before:-) good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/28/2014 5:12:00 AM
A good thought in 3 lines, best wishes for the contest
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Date: 9/28/2014 4:54:00 AM
sorry not haiku but the amazing n unique new form!
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Date: 9/28/2014 4:49:00 AM
Witty n brilliant is ur haiku Carolyn! Glad to know u r a three , I too m a three! Good wishes!
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