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I'M a Three

Born too austere,
even dear ones
her sneer evoked.


*Birthday is July 14.  7 + 1 + 4 = 12  so  1 + 2 = 3

Written September 28, 2014

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Bl Devnath

Date: 10/7/2014 2:49:00 PM

Genius way you have chosen to let us know your birth day. Congrats on your win. Sorry for late. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Paul Callus

Date: 10/6/2014 6:05:00 PM

Thank you for the smile you put on my face, Carolyn. Never heard of this form, but I love its contents! Congrats on a lovely win. // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/6/2014 12:17:00 PM

Congratulations on this fine entry winning Carolyn. I agree, we think alike as I said we are kindred spirits. Thank you for your comment about my poem too. Blessings, Connie

Faye Gibson

Date: 10/4/2014 4:16:00 PM

I am not familiar with this form, but I love what you did with it. Congratulations.

Tim Smith

Date: 10/4/2014 12:05:00 PM

Stopping back with my congratulations.....hugs Tim

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/4/2014 10:51:00 AM

And back wid huge congrats Carolyn on this lovely winning poem in the new form!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/4/2014 8:13:00 AM

Congratulations Carolyn, this is a neat form well executed, thank you for the education. A great win.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/4/2014 7:45:00 AM

Brilliant little humor poem Carolyn. I can imagine how difficult this would be yet you did a job. Congratulations on your win.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/4/2014 5:50:00 AM

Enjoyed your humor, Carolyn, congrats on the win,

Jan Allison

Date: 10/4/2014 4:08:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Carolyn:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/4/2014 1:51:00 AM

I am not crazy for this form, but you did it to perfection, Carolyn. Congrats on your win! You have a great number too!!

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/4/2014 5:28:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. This form seemed best to me as a "three." I did check out the kimo and sijo, but found no inspiration there. Thanks again, Carolyn