I'M

I'm like the rain who can transmute your aggressive heat into coolness.

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Sponsored by: Silent One
Date - 5th October 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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De Beaulieu Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 3:25 PM
Augustus I like your poem. a one line poem that says it all.Well done.
Neumann Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 4:05 AM
Clever. Congratulations.
Dietrich Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 7:53 PM
This is a lovely description of oneself. And big congrats on the win.
Black Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 8:29 PM
Oh, thank you so much.
Y. Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 9:02 AM
Hi Augustus, I agree with Laura, this is deep. Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
Black Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 8:29 PM
Many thanks.
Scars Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 7:23 AM
.wow Augustus! Very deep...congrats! :)-luloo
Black Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 8:28 PM
Thank you.
Kimathi Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 6:42 AM
Powerful and subtle!!! Congrats Augustus, for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
Black Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 8:28 PM
Thanks Teddy, have fun.
Murray Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 6:35 AM
Oh lovely. Please lay those hands on me.
Black Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 8:27 PM
Thank you so much Mam, actually I need your hands. Be happy.
Turner Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 8:56 AM
"Blessed is the peacemaker for he shall inherit the earth." Nice one Augustus.
Black Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 7:50 PM
Thanks a lot Sir, Have a nice day.
Gupta Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 4:38 AM
Wow ... great ... GL ...
Black Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 7:49 PM
Thank you. Sir
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