I'M

I'm like the rain who can transmute your aggressive heat into coolness. ______________________________________ Sponsored by: Silent One Date - 5th October 2016

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/20/2016 3:25:00 PM

Augustus I like your poem. a one line poem that says it all.Well done.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 10/7/2016 4:05:00 AM

Clever. Congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/6/2016 7:53:00 PM

This is a lovely description of oneself. And big congrats on the win.

Augustus Black
Date: 10/6/2016 8:29:00 PM

Oh, thank you so much.

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/6/2016 9:02:00 AM

Hi Augustus, I agree with Laura, this is deep. Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis

Augustus Black
Date: 10/6/2016 8:29:00 PM

Many thanks.

Lu Loo

Date: 10/6/2016 7:23:00 AM

.wow Augustus! Very deep...congrats! :)-luloo

Augustus Black
Date: 10/6/2016 8:28:00 PM

Thank you.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 10/6/2016 6:42:00 AM

Powerful and subtle!!! Congrats Augustus, for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)

Augustus Black
Date: 10/6/2016 8:28:00 PM

Thanks Teddy, have fun.

Jean Murray

Date: 10/6/2016 6:35:00 AM

Oh lovely. Please lay those hands on me.

Augustus Black
Date: 10/6/2016 8:27:00 PM

Thank you so much Mam, actually I need your hands. Be happy.

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/5/2016 8:56:00 AM

"Blessed is the peacemaker for he shall inherit the earth." Nice one Augustus.

Augustus Black
Date: 10/5/2016 7:50:00 PM

Thanks a lot Sir, Have a nice day.

Probir Gupta

Date: 10/5/2016 4:38:00 AM

Wow ... great ... GL ...

Augustus Black
Date: 10/5/2016 7:49:00 PM

Thank you. Sir