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Written 20 October 2025 for Illusku: Illustrated Haiku Challenge 2 of JCB Brul

Illusku


                       Illusku

green leaves softly sigh
sunlight paints the garden bright~
peace fills up my soul.

                                  .                  .                .
               e             a    v           f     t             
       r           e       e        e      o          l        i     g
    g               n    l            s   s            y    s        h,
            ll                    ll               ll                ll

                                 \
                    u     n     l
             \ s                        i/
           n                                g
       \ e                                     t /      
      d                      b                   ~      
    - r                t           r            p-
       a               h          i            a
       / g                   g                i\
           e                              n
           /     h    t     s       t \  
                    /           \

peace f ~i ~l ~l ~s    u-p m -y   s-o- u-l.
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Kendrick Avatar
November 6, 2025 at 3:14 AM
Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
Poet Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 3:46 AM
Back with hearty congratulations on your contest win.
Dietrich Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 3:54 PM
Very nice , Krish. Congrats
Andresen Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 10:15 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, a lovely haiku :) - hugs
Dietrich Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 10:15 AM
Wonderful!!
Guptar Avatar
October 25, 2025 at 11:15 PM
Thank you dear poetess for appreciating the above write. Wish you a wonderful day.
Poet Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 10:05 AM
May your words serve as a balm for the soul. Your illustration is splendid, capturing the green leaves' gentle sighs as sunlight spills its brilliance, and the spirit dances in ecstasy.
Guptar Avatar
October 25, 2025 at 11:11 PM
Thank you dear poet for your masterly comments, which are so inspiring. Wish you a very bright day.
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