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I am cute hanging,
red apples falling,
oh no ~ they eat me.

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Sara Kendrick

November 6, 2025 at 3:20 AM

Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

November 6, 2025 at 6:36 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Also thanks for your, Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun apple "Illusku" write/shape. It was hard to do but fun to bring to life. Enjoy your day eating an apple as you write away.................

Terry Miller

November 5, 2025 at 2:11 AM

Very Clever, congratulations

Paula Goldsmith

November 5, 2025 at 9:53 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Also thanks for your, Congratulations. Glad you found my fun apple "Illusku" to be a, Very Clever. It was hard but fun to bring to life. This apple tree shape was a problem for me. Enjoy your day eating an apple as you write away.................

Andrea Dietrich

November 4, 2025 at 4:01 PM

Fun one. Congrats, dear

Paula Goldsmith

November 5, 2025 at 9:51 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Also thanks for your, Congratulations. Glad you found my fun apple "Illusku" to be a, Fun one. It was fun to bring to life. This apple tree shape was a real problem. First one I have ever done. Enjoy your day eating an apple as you write away.................

Sotto Poet

November 4, 2025 at 10:51 AM

Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem, dear Friend, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith

November 4, 2025 at 12:26 PM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Also thanks for your, Congratulations. Glad you found my fun apple "Illusku" to be a, beautiful poem. It was fun to bring to life. The apple tree shape was a real problem for me. It is the first one I have ever done. Enjoy your day eating an apple as you write away.................

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 4, 2025 at 10:09 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Paula :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

November 4, 2025 at 12:24 PM

Thanks for stopping back over to read/write. Also thanks for your, Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun apple "Illusku" write again. I enjoyed writing this red apple tree shape. Hugs... Enjoy your day eating an apple as you write away.................

Paula Goldsmith

November 4, 2025 at 8:13 AM

"3 Place" Illusku ~ Date Written:10/10/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet....

David Crandall

October 14, 2025 at 6:45 PM

Haha, nice one!

Paula Goldsmith

November 4, 2025 at 8:12 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my fun apple "Illusku" write. I enjoyed writing this one with a shape. Enjoy your day eating an apple as you write away.................

Valsa George

October 13, 2025 at 8:09 PM

Nice shape of the apple tree and a sweet haiku. All the Best.

Paula Goldsmith

October 14, 2025 at 10:58 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Also thanks for your, All the Best. Glad you found my fun apple "Illusku" to be a, Nice shape of the apple tree and a sweet haiku. It was fun to bring to life. The apple tree shape was a real problem for me. It is the first one I have ever done. Enjoy your day eating an apple as you write away.................

Line Gauthier

October 13, 2025 at 11:30 AM

Such a pretty illusku ~ this bloom looks like it might even smell good !

Paula Goldsmith

October 14, 2025 at 10:55 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you found my fun apple "Illusku" to be, Such a pretty illusku. It was fun to write. The apple tree shape was a problem for me. Enjoy your day eating an apple as you write away.................

sara Etgen-Baker

October 12, 2025 at 3:16 PM

this is most clever....best wishes with this contest entry, hugs and blessings, Sara

Paula Goldsmith

October 13, 2025 at 8:43 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Also thanks for your, best wishes with this contest entry. Glad you found my fun apple "Illusku" to be, most clever. It was fun to write. The tree shapes were a problem. Enjoy your day eating an apple as you write away.................

Tania Kitchin

October 12, 2025 at 1:27 PM

Paula, a cute poem. The contest does specify to have an illustration of some sort in the poem. Maybe an apple or two?

Tania Kitchin

October 12, 2025 at 3:16 PM

Paula, it looks great. Best of luck in the contest.

Paula Goldsmith

October 12, 2025 at 1:38 PM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you found my fun apple "Illusku" to be, a cute poem. I enjoyed writing this one. The shapes were a problem. After reading the two comments, I went and fixed it. It hope it is now OK. Enjoy your day eating an apple as you write away.................

Dr. Vandana Sharma

October 12, 2025 at 12:44 AM

I live in the state of apples from India!!and I have eaten so many of them ,that i cannot eat anymore!!!

Paula Goldsmith

October 12, 2025 at 1:43 PM

Thanks for your note below. I added the apple tree with falling apples. Hope it is now OK. Have a blessed day writing away.......

Paula Goldsmith

October 12, 2025 at 1:24 PM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my fun apple "Illusku" write. Many times when we a lot of something, we no longer want it. I love apple season with fresh and baked goodies. Warm apple pie with ice ream, please. I enjoyed writing this one. Enjoy your day eating an apple as you write away.................

William Kelii Kekaula

October 11, 2025 at 1:54 PM

Well, this is that apple pie season, keeping us indoors most often, blessings your way, again. Aloha.

Paula Goldsmith

October 12, 2025 at 1:22 PM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my fun apple "Illusku" write. Oh yes, it is apple season for fresh and baked goodies. Warm apple pie with ice ream, please. I enjoyed writing this one. Enjoy your day eating an apple as you write away.................

Andrea Dietrich

October 11, 2025 at 12:06 PM

This is nice. But I am confused. Are we supposed to create a picture for this contest?

Paula Goldsmith

October 12, 2025 at 1:42 PM

Thanks for your note. I added the apple tree with falling apples. Hope it is now OK. Have a blessed day writing away.......

Paula Goldsmith

October 12, 2025 at 1:20 PM

Thanks for your note. I do not know. Guess I will double check. Have a fun day writing away...............

Dr. Vandana Sharma

October 12, 2025 at 12:43 AM

yes, same confusion on my side as well!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 11, 2025 at 2:12 AM

- A fun one, Paula :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

October 11, 2025 at 11:16 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Also thanks for your, Best wishes in the contest. Glad you found my fun apple "Illusku" to be, A fun one. It was a ton of fun to write. Hugs... Enjoy your day eating an apple as you write away.................

Sara Kendrick

October 11, 2025 at 1:59 AM

Okay, a Halloween write in such a short form. Bobbing for apples or trying to get a bite out of hanging apples is a fun game for young people. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Way to go. It reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

October 11, 2025 at 11:14 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my fun apple "Illusku" write. I enjoyed writing this one. Enjoy your day eating an apple as you write away.................

sara Etgen-Baker

October 10, 2025 at 5:56 PM

pretty clever, Paula...liked the flow hugs for the upcoming weekend, Sara

Paula Goldsmith

October 11, 2025 at 11:13 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you found my fun apple "Illusku" to be, pretty clever. I enjoyed writing this one. Enjoy your day eating an apple as you write away.................

Paula Goldsmith

October 10, 2025 at 3:58 PM

Illusku ~ Date Written:10/10/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet....

Illusku

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