Illusive Mirage

Happiness races like the cheerful deer
Can’t be kept forever in the inept frame
Drifts always like illusive mirage farther
Can’t be reached for the thirst to tame.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Barden Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 1:28 AM
Great stuff, Subimal - enjoyed this very much! Congrats, my friend! :-)
Rebstock Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 8:04 AM
Very creative.
Canerdy Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 7:56 AM
Congratulations, Subimal! Janice
Sands Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 4:50 PM
Congratulations Subimal :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 12:25 AM
Thank you, Heidi.
La France Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 2:10 PM
Subimal, congrats on your wonderful win !
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 12:26 AM
Thank you, BW.
Michelle Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 1:30 PM
very illusive indeed, Subimal. this was excellent! Sorry for the wait, but congrats on your placement in the contest! Love, Juli-Michelle
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October 5, 2017 at 12:27 AM
Thank you, Juli-Michelle for your appreciation.
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