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Illusive Mirage

Happiness races like the cheerful deer Can’t be kept forever in the inept frame Drifts always like illusive mirage farther Can’t be reached for the thirst to tame.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/7/2017 1:28:00 AM
Great stuff, Subimal - enjoyed this very much! Congrats, my friend! :-)
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Date: 10/5/2017 8:04:00 AM
Very creative.
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Date: 10/5/2017 7:56:00 AM
Congratulations, Subimal! Janice
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Date: 10/4/2017 4:50:00 PM
Congratulations Subimal :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/5/2017 12:25:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi.
Date: 10/4/2017 2:10:00 PM
Subimal, congrats on your wonderful win !
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/5/2017 12:26:00 AM
Thank you, BW.
Date: 10/4/2017 1:30:00 PM
very illusive indeed, Subimal. this was excellent! Sorry for the wait, but congrats on your placement in the contest! Love, Juli-Michelle
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/5/2017 12:27:00 AM
Thank you, Juli-Michelle for your appreciation.

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