Illusive Dream

brotherhood of man living in harmony ~ why can't it be?



AP: Honorable Mention 2022
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Kendrick Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 4:21 AM
Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Man is controlled by his greed, lust, and other negative traits. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Gauthier Avatar
July 4, 2022 at 10:46 AM
Thank, Sara ~
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