Illusionary Home

Building your home
Besides a river
Is pure illusion
When there's big rain
Everything goes
Down the drain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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De Beaulieu Avatar
November 12, 2024 at 2:48 PM
Hello Hugo, right never build a home by a river. Much love here. /Darlelne/
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 16, 2024 at 11:08 AM
Hello Hugo, I agree it is not wise to build near a river.. A flood could happen and the house would be in ruined. So just to walk to a river or lake would be better to enjoy. Love lots. /Darlene/
Sarvida Jr. Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 7:59 AM
Building wise, it's not advisable to build home besides a river because of global warming. Metaphorically, unprincipled man is like that also, short-sighted and shallow mindedness. Love lots here./Hugo.
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