Illusion of Solidity

Flowing river, pooling puddles, sloppy drip.
Hold me warm
until I’m nothing but water.
Caress me, and I will give life to your earth. 
Seeping blood into your veins
and rejuvenating your soul.

Then leave.

Because one day I will wake
without you beside me,
and the world will be so cold.
My rains will hail,
my lakes will freeze.
I will be ice
just to survive.
My winter will kill the life sowed.

I am only hard for so long,
until Spring springs,
as she does.
Her sweet charm
breaks me, soothing me back.


I will be a flowing river again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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September 21, 2026 at 7:39 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
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August 28, 2026 at 3:15 PM
Like ice flowing down stream it melted away.
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