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Illusion In Love

I was secure everything seemed to be safe and perfect You encouraged me to perform every possibility with no defect I failed to fulfill your dreams that you have designed Now only pictures in my mind that you've left behind Changes were there when it comes to my choice & my taste Sometimes I am amazed thinking about my desire & my interest But your presence, your love wouldn't let me think deep Perhaps I accepted all because I wanted our relation to keep We were proud,When we say we're made for each other Words seemed very strong and heavy when we said "Together Forever" At that moment I thought it's going to be all real Now I am aware even time is not going to heal Though the world was against us, you dared to stand still On this tough road I stood abreast you, that is my will All the while this child was being fooled to be true The prank that you played still remains, almighty YOU!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/28/2015 4:45:00 AM
Hi Pranath, enjoyed this piece, very well written!. Best Regards my friend!.
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Date: 2/19/2015 6:36:00 PM
Pranath:) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 2/16/2015 5:38:00 AM
- Welcome to P Soup, Pranath - A pleasure to read your first great poem, thank you chose to share it here with us - I wish you a nice day - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/13/2015 11:46:00 PM
PRANATH, HAPPY VALENTINES, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/13/2015 10:48:00 PM
Pranath, that's what I call awesome.. A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) As I hope one day you will follow and give me a few poetry pointers. We're Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Valentines day, with your New Poet Friend! Happy Valentine's @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/10/2015 9:25:00 AM
Nice pen! so sad that this happens all the time everywhere, dear friend.In His light! God bless! :) Love n hugs! xxx D.
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Pranath Khatri
Date: 2/10/2015 9:52:00 AM
credit goes to my sis she helped me on this,am a beginner just learning

Book: Shattered Sighs