Illusion Illuminated

Illusion illuminated instantly
Reality realized… rationally
Nature noticed normally
Vision vitalized vibrantly
Life lived… laudably
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chappell Avatar
November 16, 2010 at 8:32 PM
nice piece here my friend thank you
A  Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 10:40 AM
Enjoyed your poem~SKAT
Neels Avatar
August 25, 2010 at 12:42 PM
Awesome write Adeleke :)
Conway Avatar
August 25, 2010 at 9:32 AM
Wonderful alliteration...Soupmail!~Tirzah~
Falotico Avatar
August 25, 2010 at 5:56 AM
Wonderful write that shared today...very enjoyed always Michael
R Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 7:41 AM
Great alliteration, such a sweet write. Emily
Akinsoyinu Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 3:56 AM
Short and really sweet.U dey rep naija wella
Horsman Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 12:47 AM
excellent Alliteration, enjoyed this. Harry
Al-Khalili Avatar
August 19, 2010 at 11:29 PM
Life, you spoke of life and it's moments. A poem that goes into my favourites, a poem, that with complete and utter honesty, is one of the best I have ever read. Keep smiling, Sami.
Freeman Avatar
August 19, 2010 at 10:41 AM
Cool Alliteration, Adeleke. You coverered all points very well. Thanks for your comments today, they are very important to me. Agape, Moses
Lee Avatar
August 18, 2010 at 9:01 PM
Adorable alliteration Adeleke
Culverhouse Avatar
August 18, 2010 at 5:43 PM
great alliteration...enjoyed!
Sweetheart Avatar
August 18, 2010 at 3:31 PM
Very pretty flow Adeleke... I have a poem entitle the same thing .. luv alliteration for titles .. I use that a lot too... we need to have an alliteration contest..my friend.. see soup mail please.. kinda urgent.. don't understand .. confused.. with a comment..luv.. ciao..
Devonshire Avatar
August 18, 2010 at 12:50 PM
Incredible alliteration, Adeleke. And I admire your reality-based, yet joyful perspective on life. Really enjoyed the poem on your blog as well. Love, Carolyn
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