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Illusion

I stood out in the rain pieces of me dripped out of my eyes as it stained My skin with burning pain never stopped an out of control train that crashes up in flames Smoke and fire spreading as I am standing in the middle of this endless plain Still watching as my good continues to battle my evil with never ending rain Hallucinating I'm starting to think a frown or a smile are one in the same...

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Date: 3/17/2018 3:43:00 PM
wow great poem you are very talented and I've felt the same a few days
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Date: 3/21/2017 3:28:00 PM
Creative, expressive poem that really highlights the emotional impact of this poem, Sofia! Well done, 7 :)
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Date: 3/21/2017 2:56:00 PM
Sometimes when we are caught in the middle of an emotional storm it is difficult to know the difference between a frown and a smile because, neither really matter that much at the time. Nicely expressed Sofia.
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Date: 3/21/2017 3:03:00 PM
very true Love the way you put that Chris

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