Illusion

hawk 
circling above
        rabbits
hopping in wet
grass      sun is
warm and
bright

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Pheko Motaung

Date: 8/14/2016 12:48:00 AM

A profound,wonderful haiku!thank you poet

Barry Levy
Date: 8/14/2016 10:46:00 AM

Thank you for your very generous commentary.

John Hamilton

Date: 8/13/2016 5:12:00 PM

You have a very interesting perspective, I thoroughly enjoy your writing!

Barry Levy
Date: 8/13/2016 5:32:00 PM

Thank you very much for your kind words.

Steven Henderson

Date: 8/13/2016 11:16:00 AM

Imaginative and thought provoking, nice!!! Peace and blessings to you my friend.

Barry Levy
Date: 8/13/2016 11:22:00 AM

Thank you. You are very generous, kind sir. Be well and be safe.