Illusion

hawk 
circling above
        rabbits
hopping in wet
grass      sun is
warm and
bright
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Motaung Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 12:48 AM
A profound,wonderful haiku!thank you poet
Levy Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 10:46 AM
Thank you for your very generous commentary.
Hamilton Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 5:12 PM
You have a very interesting perspective, I thoroughly enjoy your writing!
Levy Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 5:32 PM
Thank you very much for your kind words.
Henderson Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 11:16 AM
Imaginative and thought provoking, nice!!! Peace and blessings to you my friend.
Levy Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 11:22 AM
Thank you. You are very generous, kind sir. Be well and be safe.
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