Illusion

All I see is the light in me Shining bright from the ones I lost And left behind, but I'll be alright What does not kill me Makes me tougher than tough! Love is an illusion A nice one but still An illusion! Chasing love is like Chasing the wind Disappointing And vain!

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Beata Agustin

Date: 12/5/2024 1:42:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/7/2016 10:28:00 AM

HI... Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/12/2016 2:41:00 PM

Enescu, Enjoyed reading your poem, Forever ---SKAT

Arnold Stucz

Date: 2/2/2014 11:11:00 PM

the circle of life gives and takes away the best and worst things in life, when true love comes in never leaves, maybe the body of the person you love leaves but not the love.

Daver Austin

Date: 12/30/2013 10:59:00 AM

Hey! I've been there too. Still there once in a while. Some good times now though. Congrats on the selection. daver

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/29/2013 11:29:00 AM

- HAPPY NEW YEAR,ENESCU!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sophia Valentina

Date: 12/23/2013 6:10:00 AM

Foarte bine. Imi place.

Michael Ainsley

Date: 12/21/2013 10:24:00 PM

To love is its own reward . We must become what we are looking for.The great illusion is thinking we are not connected Enescu .Spend a few days silently loving everyone. I know about death and war. I lost a leg in Viet Nam etc.. Forgiveness and love is all we have. Keep writing.Find love in your heart first and it will draw others love to you. My best wishes Michael.

Aiyah Torres

Date: 12/4/2013 5:07:00 PM

hi dear Luiza :).. nice poem, keep penning!loved your piece :)_AiyaH :')

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/3/2013 1:19:00 PM

Enescu, I don't mind the illusion in you, or how we chase it.., I like your first poetic piece on the site , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/3/2013 1:15:00 PM

- Welcome to P-Soup, Enescu ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)