Lena Townsend Poet Free verse

Illusion

Peacefully dreaming
Floating on the waves of your love
I can feel myself drifting
A utopia of pure romance
Without a care in the world
My body as light as a feather
My soul free to soar amongst the eagles
The shining light of your love
Transcending all doubt or shame
Just as the sun and moon
Penetrate the full branches of the trees
I am mesmerized by your eyes
Captured by their glow
Hypnotized by your words
Your whispers lay soft upon my neck
Caressing me with the heat of your passions
Your kiss a mere reflection of your hunger
Sparking the blaze within 
Tantalizing and tempting me
In your arms I am swept away
Embraced by the whirlwind
Captive by your touch 
Imprisoned by pleasure
Driven by desire
I am yearning for your affection
Everything you are cries out to me
Everything I am is surrendered to you
Our souls mingle and intertwine
As one body, one spirit, and one mind

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 31, 2010 at 8:40 PM OH so lovely and romantic Lolita.. such beautiful descriptive words flowing into lines of pure luv... expressive and impressive creation from your gifted pen.. going to my favs now... luv.. Linda-Marie... thankxxx for your loving comments always on my poetry.. u are a dear friend.. also I just posted a new blog about a Valentine's Day poem co write.. check it out... luv..

Juliane Thomas December 10, 2009 at 4:25 AM Beautifully written! Love this part especially: "The shining light of your love Transcending all doubt or shame Just as the sun and moon Penetrate the full branches of the trees" - Just wonderful! ~Juliane

John Freeman December 9, 2009 at 11:38 AM O yes! That soul meld lovemaking is the only way to complete what the Master of love intended it to be, between a man and a woman. Compared to the shallow stuff people do in this day, is like a child trying to put his socks on for the first. The divorces in this day are all the proof we humans need to establish this fact. Good job sister! Sincerely, Love Moses

Marty Owens December 7, 2009 at 7:40 PM Very nice poem...Enjoyed reading tonight...Marty

Raul Moreno December 7, 2009 at 7:31 PM "Floating on the waves of your love" great line, loved it. Nice work with a fabulous ending...Raul

Anita Longino December 7, 2009 at 5:35 PM Beautifully descriptive. Great write. I enjoyed reading this very much. Thanks for sharing. Sky

Carolyn Devonshire December 7, 2009 at 5:01 PM Methings this is more than an "Illusion," Lolita. Anyone who can describe passion so well must have truly experienced the joy that love brings. Very nice! Love, Carolyn