Illusion

I have no idea who or what he really is....He wears a mask, he's charming, he's manipulative...he lies. His whole life is really a lie. To say that I am in love with him is merely an illusion

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Date: 5/26/2009 8:37:00 PM

Interesting perspective for the reader to think about. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

Edward Orozco

Date: 5/26/2009 6:28:00 PM

Wow! Great use of imagery here! - jeremia

James Fraser

Date: 5/26/2009 4:00:00 PM

Maybe the world is an illusion, and i am not really here to leave a comment, if true - where did the comment come from. Welcome to the soup, nice write>James

L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/26/2009 1:13:00 PM

Illusions are powerful we believe them ... like I believe poetry. Welcome, love and happiness at the soup.