Illusion

I have no idea who or what he really is....He wears a mask, he's charming, he's 
manipulative...he lies.  His whole life is really a lie.  To say that I am in love with him is 
merely an illusion
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 26, 2009 at 8:37 PM
Interesting perspective for the reader to think about. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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May 26, 2009 at 6:28 PM
Wow! Great use of imagery here! - jeremia
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May 26, 2009 at 4:00 PM
Maybe the world is an illusion, and i am not really here to leave a comment, if true - where did the comment come from. Welcome to the soup, nice write>James
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May 26, 2009 at 1:13 PM
Illusions are powerful we believe them ... like I believe poetry. Welcome, love and happiness at the soup.
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