Illuminating

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illuminating summer's golden sunset.... black dot 'pon silk web

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Bill Baker

Date: 9/6/2022 2:15:00 PM

Creative way to show the imagery of spider, web and light, Sara. Enjoy this Haiku, my friend. Blessings, Bill

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/7/2022 4:26:00 AM

Thank you, Bill. I appreciate the blessings and so glad you enjoyed. Sara

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/6/2022 10:09:00 AM

Dear Sara, your haiku is simply splendid! Great imagery and fantastic last line. Spider webs are beautiful in the sunlight aren't they..? but not so great when you walk into one in the dark.. yuck! lol! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/6/2022 10:42:00 AM

Yes, Susan, I do dislike walking into one. They have a beauty of their own covered in dew or rain drops, also, revealed by the sun. Your visit is a delight as well. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/5/2022 9:17:00 AM

Something must have been caught in the web. Lovely picture.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/5/2022 9:36:00 AM

Victor, It was the spider with its legs drawn in and looking like a little dot. LOL..Trickery maybe on the spider's part. Thanks for the interesting comment. Sara