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Illuminating

illuminating summer's golden sunset.... black dot 'pon silk web
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Baker Avatar
September 6, 2022 at 2:15 PM
Creative way to show the imagery of spider, web and light, Sara. Enjoy this Haiku, my friend. Blessings, Bill
Kendrick Avatar
September 7, 2022 at 4:26 AM
Thank you, Bill. I appreciate the blessings and so glad you enjoyed. Sara
Ashley Avatar
September 6, 2022 at 10:09 AM
Dear Sara, your haiku is simply splendid! Great imagery and fantastic last line. Spider webs are beautiful in the sunlight aren't they..? but not so great when you walk into one in the dark.. yuck! lol! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Kendrick Avatar
September 6, 2022 at 10:42 AM
Yes, Susan, I do dislike walking into one. They have a beauty of their own covered in dew or rain drops, also, revealed by the sun. Your visit is a delight as well. Sara
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September 5, 2022 at 9:17 AM
Something must have been caught in the web. Lovely picture.
Kendrick Avatar
September 5, 2022 at 9:36 AM
Victor, It was the spider with its legs drawn in and looking like a little dot. LOL..Trickery maybe on the spider's part. Thanks for the interesting comment. Sara
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