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. . because you understand

even my most complicated sides,

those complete

or asymmetric

- darkness scatters in every direction -

yet, somehow . .

at just the right angle,

my universe

illuminates your world

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* To Always be Your Light *

Illuminate

~ A Simple Scribble ~

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William HAYNES

Date: 3/29/2025 10:41:00 PM

All I can say is I really liked this one

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/30/2025 5:22:00 PM

I appreciate you saying you like this little scribble of mine. Thank you, William. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/18/2021 5:18:00 AM

Your scribble, which is far more than a scribble is breathtaking - to be one's light and for them to be yours is surely absolutely perfect and especially when you write 'my universe illuminates your world.' Beautiful Brandy, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/31/2021 9:36:00 AM

Jennifer, your lovely comment brings a smile to my heart. All of your kind words and compliments take me to the sky. Thank you so much, my dear sweet friend. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

John Watt

Date: 3/30/2021 4:35:00 PM

Brandy, I love this subtly nuanced expression of human interaction and the delicate balance of two complicated individuals seeking to understand and love one another. I especially appreciated the words illuminate and asymmetric. Keep writing your heartfelt scribbles! Blessings, dear friend ~ John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/30/2021 7:42:00 PM

It is a wonderful feeling indeed, being the light in someone's world, when they are a light in your world. Thank you John, for all your kind words. I will continue to scribble from the heart, my dear sweet friend. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Judy Ball

Date: 3/27/2021 8:23:00 AM

What a clever and beautiful piece, Love the pic. God Bless, JB

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/27/2021 10:17:00 PM

Thank you, Judy. So kind of you to say. Your thoughts bring a smile. My best to you. :) Brandy

Poet Tacito

Date: 3/22/2021 9:58:00 PM

Powerful. Because even though the sun is round, all it takes is a shadow to potentially disregard all of it. Great ending.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/23/2021 8:27:00 PM

You are exactly right. Shadows cover any light that longs to shine through. Thank you, Poet. Your thoughts are greatly appreciated. My best to you. :) Brandy

Joseph May

Date: 3/18/2021 6:40:00 PM

Lovey write Brandy..

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/19/2021 4:01:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 3/17/2021 4:07:00 PM

Nice penning Brandy, so well put to capture one's inner thoughts. Blessings,Gordon

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/17/2021 8:47:00 PM

Thank you, Gordon. So kind of you to read this little scribble of mine. My best to you. :) Brandy

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/15/2021 10:51:00 AM

Thanks for your visit. Hugs Rick.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/15/2021 7:28:00 PM

You are very welcome, Richard. :) Hugs, Brandy

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/13/2021 4:25:00 PM

Let me know when you post a new one. Hugs Rick.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/13/2021 8:31:00 PM

Of course, Richard. My muse is hiding in the clouds somewhere. She will come out to play when she is ready. Perhaps I need to tickle her. :) Brandy

David Kavanagh

Date: 3/12/2021 3:26:00 PM

Heya Brandy, the tilt of a head, at just the right angle, can make all the difference between ordinary and extraordinary, amazing how you put these subtleties, into a poem and dispel the darkness, cheers David

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/12/2021 7:22:00 PM

Hi David, such a sweet surprise finding your thoughts upon this little scribble of mine. Indeed, at just the right angle, everything makes sense. Such a wonderful compliment. Thank you. I am simply writing from the heart. My best to you. :) Brandy

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/11/2021 7:57:00 AM

Goodness, Brandy...sweet like blossoming Spring Ephemerals!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/11/2021 6:48:00 PM

Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. Thank you, James. :) Brandy

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/10/2021 11:20:00 AM

You are a welcome addition, you add needed flavour to the soup. Hugs Rick.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/10/2021 7:51:00 PM

You are making me blush. Such a sweet thing to say to me. Thank you, Richard. :) Hugs, Brandy

Paul Callus

Date: 3/10/2021 2:42:00 AM

In every relationship there needs be love and understanding of one another. Without them the 'right angle' would be hard to find! Hopefully some of that universe will shine my way :) Always a pleasure to read your work, Brandy. Regards & Hugs // paul

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/10/2021 7:48:00 PM

Your thoughts hold so much truth, Paul. It will be difficult connecting, finding the right angle, if there isn't love and understanding. Light is shining your way. :) Some from my universe. Thank you. I appreciate you and your kind words. :) Hugs, Brandy

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 3/9/2021 8:33:00 AM

lovely scribbler, straight from the heart

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/9/2021 7:41:00 PM

Thank you, Nancy. Yes, these words are from my heart. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Running Wolves

Date: 3/9/2021 8:18:00 AM

Beautiful poem

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/9/2021 7:36:00 PM

Thank you, Robert. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy

Susan Lawrence

Date: 3/9/2021 7:57:00 AM

Brandi, Beautiful, tender and intimate. I love the intimacy of knowing and accepting someone on such a deep level. "yet somehow..at just the right angle, my universe illuminates your world" Definitely a gift. All the best, Susan :)

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/9/2021 7:17:00 PM

Dear Susan, thank you so much for this wonderful comment. At just the right angle, everything makes sense. Imperfections are overlooked. Your kind words are greatly appreciated. My best to you. :) Brandy

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/9/2021 7:47:00 AM

Congrats on becoming a lifetime member. Hugs Rick.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/9/2021 7:01:00 PM

Thank you, Richard. I am enjoying this journey with words. Being here with so many amazing poets. :) Brandy

Edward Ibeh

Date: 3/7/2021 2:45:00 PM

This is beautifully written, as always! I really enjoyed reading this, Brandy:-)

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/7/2021 8:50:00 PM

Thank you, Edward. You and your thoughts are greatly appreciated. Your kindness doesn't go unnoticed. :) Brandy

Akkina Downing

Date: 3/5/2021 8:41:00 PM

This is just perfect and delightful... I love it :)

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/6/2021 7:01:00 PM

Awe, thank you Akkina. Your thoughts are a delight to read and they bring a smile. Such a lovely comment. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/2/2021 7:57:00 AM

I really like how you expressed this. Hugs Rick.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/2/2021 7:26:00 PM

Thank you Richard. Just a little scribble from my heart. Your kind words are appreciated. :) Hugs, Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 3/2/2021 6:34:00 AM

At just the right angle your heart lights up the world. Soft tender words spoken from the heart. Another beautiful scribble, Brandy. All my best to you. Hugs, John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/2/2021 7:25:00 PM

Awe, my heart is smiling. :) I appreciate the compliment. Thank you, John. Such a wonderful thing to say. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/2/2021 5:47:00 AM

Much delight in that world where a loved one is your light. As always, your poem so tender, hits just the right notes for illuminating love. Well done, Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/2/2021 7:18:00 PM

Those in our lives that mean so much, should always feel our light. Thank you, Vijay. You and your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. :) Brandy