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I'll Try To Be Good

Deep dark chocolate, dry red wine The combination tastes so fine Like the richest, most delicious fare Is my bonny with the gorgeous hair I feast upon her beauty, drink in all her grace Long for someday, maybe, when I could simply place The lightest kiss upon her hand and walk with her on golden sand Drink milk from island coconut And watch the sunsets from our hut

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Jenna Logan

Date: 1/18/2023 9:58:00 AM

Your plans sound wonderfully romantic, Andres. I hope they all come to fruition for you.

Jenna Logan
Date: 1/18/2023 8:52:00 PM

je vous en prie

Andres Luis Bigote
Date: 1/18/2023 2:50:00 PM

Merci beaucoup

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/17/2023 10:34:00 AM

You are a romance poet! Love the wine and chocolate, drink milk from island coconut and watch sunsets from our hut. Both pairings equally enticing. It is not for a day but for numerous perhaps a lifetime of sunsets!

Andres Luis Bigote
Date: 1/17/2023 11:38:00 AM

Thank you