I'll Try To Be Good

Deep dark chocolate, dry red wine 
The combination tastes so fine
Like the richest, most delicious fare
Is my bonny with the gorgeous hair
I feast upon her beauty, drink in all her grace
Long for someday, maybe, when I could simply place
The lightest kiss upon her hand and walk with her on golden sand
Drink milk from island coconut 
And watch the sunsets from our hut
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Logan Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 9:58 AM
Your plans sound wonderfully romantic, Andres. I hope they all come to fruition for you.
Logan Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 8:52 PM
je vous en prie
Bigote Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 2:50 PM
Merci beaucoup
Rodrigues Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 10:34 AM
You are a romance poet! Love the wine and chocolate, drink milk from island coconut and watch sunsets from our hut. Both pairings equally enticing. It is not for a day but for numerous perhaps a lifetime of sunsets!
Bigote Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 11:38 AM
Thank you
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