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I'll Take Something In White

i'll take something in white

men dressed in black suits
little black dresses compete
a girl goes shopping


©Donna Jones

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/11/2014 11:08:00 AM
Enjoyed this most colourless write Donna, sharpens the outline no end..'
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Date: 2/3/2014 11:03:00 AM
This is perfection in Haiku. Solid poetic imagery. Bravo, Poet!
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Date: 1/14/2014 12:01:00 PM
hello.. where are you, donnns.. huggs
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Date: 1/12/2014 3:41:00 PM
lovely write here - Congrats on your wins too
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Date: 1/12/2014 3:01:00 PM
Blinding white ,light with a smile. LOVED this one! Dutch greetings! Elly
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Date: 1/11/2014 8:22:00 AM
What a lovely way to start the New Year! What girls would be without shopping? Answer: As boring as men! Ha-ha! Beautiful haiku Donna! Thank you!
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Date: 1/8/2014 5:03:00 AM
Yeah new year is starting off great. Not fantastic though : )
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Date: 1/7/2014 4:01:00 PM
Hi Donna, Congratulation for signing on as a lifetime premium member. Nice and short poem, keep them coming.
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Date: 1/7/2014 5:33:00 PM
Thanks Gideon....appreciate that....
Date: 1/7/2014 12:11:00 PM
MD....cute adorable haiku....Just stopping by to give you a nice warm hug. Been sick...so probably not too tight....wouldn't want to give you germies!!! Love ya, MD. You will look great in whatever you wear!
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Date: 1/7/2014 5:32:00 PM
Well...big tight hug back....I'm not afraid of your germies.....thanks for the nice compliment....
Date: 1/6/2014 4:03:00 PM
Maybe a wedding dress? Light & Love
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Date: 1/7/2014 5:30:00 PM
Hi Debbie....well maybe a wedding dress for someone..:-) :-) :-) I wore bluejeans.....:-) :-) and twenty three years ago..:-) :-) :-) thanks for your visit..always glad to see you..I'm working on that bench poem..
Date: 1/6/2014 11:20:00 AM
Great idea in more ways than one..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 1/7/2014 5:28:00 PM
Thank you Sara....so good to see you..
Date: 1/5/2014 11:49:00 PM
Hi Donna, enjoyed perusing your haiku my friend. Love it. All the best in the contest.
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Date: 1/7/2014 5:27:00 PM
Hello Mustapha.....thank you....and thanks for stopping...hope your new year is starting out fantastic!
Date: 1/5/2014 9:49:00 AM
had a little party time with my friends and they were all wearing red, purple.. hah.,i wore black!.. happy sunday, donns!.. huggs
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Date: 1/7/2014 5:26:00 PM
And I know you looked awesome!!!! Happy all week to you nette...
Date: 1/4/2014 12:58:00 PM
Donna ah the little black number is always a great sight, excellent…David
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Date: 1/4/2014 10:30:00 PM
Thanks David...they never go out of style I guess..:-) :-)
Date: 1/4/2014 12:36:00 PM
Good Morning Donna.
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Date: 1/4/2014 9:23:00 AM
- Donna, nice haiku - love it!! - Luck in contest!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/4/2014 10:29:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise...so kind..
Date: 1/3/2014 7:36:00 PM
Clever girl, it is good to stand out from the rest.
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Date: 1/4/2014 10:19:00 PM
Thanks Richard....I'm ornery that way....:-) :-) :-) :-)
Date: 1/3/2014 5:58:00 PM
Happy New Year Donna! Great way to start the year out nice Haiku
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Date: 1/4/2014 10:20:00 PM
Thank so much Joseph..:-) :-) :-)
Date: 1/3/2014 5:19:00 PM
Hi Donna, An intriguing write.. Ken
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Date: 1/4/2014 10:20:00 PM
Appreciate that ken..:-) :-)
Date: 1/3/2014 4:17:00 PM
Oh and the mind goes into overdrive here Donna,,,,,Happy New Year to you,,,
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Date: 1/4/2014 10:22:00 PM
Yeah....no telling what I might wear to a fancy party...:-) :-) :-) :-) hehe...thanks Harry....
Date: 1/3/2014 2:50:00 PM
so spot on; a fashionada in the making, donns..love the naughty feel of this one-- very differently conceptualized.. i want the little black dress.. huggs!
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Date: 1/4/2014 10:24:00 PM
And you'd be the bell of the ball too..so pretty...thanks for the nice compliment nette...
Date: 1/3/2014 2:00:00 PM
Hey Donna....I wasn't one of the guys in the black suit...haha. Nicely done!
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Date: 1/4/2014 10:26:00 PM
Oh well...real tree is acceptable attire at my parties.:-)better be....bout all I wear..:-) :-)
Date: 1/2/2014 10:47:00 PM
This is a fabulous Senryu my friend, I truly loved reading this tremendous poem here this evening! What a remarkable piece, quite the lovely poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 1/4/2014 10:27:00 PM
So very nice Russell..thanks...
Date: 1/2/2014 10:31:00 PM
this is a really cute idea to do for white. I love that contrast!
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Date: 1/4/2014 10:28:00 PM
Thanks Andrea...that's sweet to say...