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I'Ll Take Something In White

i'll take something in white

men dressed in black suits
little black dresses compete
a girl goes shopping


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Joe Maverick

February 11, 2014 at 11:08 AM

Enjoyed this most colourless write Donna, sharpens the outline no end..'

Dah Dahlusion

February 3, 2014 at 11:03 AM

This is perfection in Haiku. Solid poetic imagery. Bravo, Poet!

Nette Onclaud

January 14, 2014 at 12:01 PM

hello.. where are you, donnns.. huggs

Jack Horne

January 12, 2014 at 3:41 PM

lovely write here - Congrats on your wins too

Demetrios Trifiatis

January 11, 2014 at 8:22 AM

What a lovely way to start the New Year! What girls would be without shopping? Answer: As boring as men! Ha-ha! Beautiful haiku Donna! Thank you!

Mustapha Mohammed

January 8, 2014 at 5:03 AM

Yeah new year is starting off great. Not fantastic though : )

Gideon Foli

January 7, 2014 at 4:01 PM

Hi Donna, Congratulation for signing on as a lifetime premium member. Nice and short poem, keep them coming.

Donna Jones

January 7, 2014 at 5:33 PM

Thanks Gideon....appreciate that....

Eileen Manassian

January 7, 2014 at 12:11 PM

MD....cute adorable haiku....Just stopping by to give you a nice warm hug. Been sick...so probably not too tight....wouldn't want to give you germies!!! Love ya, MD. You will look great in whatever you wear!

Donna Jones

January 7, 2014 at 5:32 PM

Well...big tight hug back....I'm not afraid of your germies.....thanks for the nice compliment....

Debbie Guzzi

January 6, 2014 at 4:03 PM

Maybe a wedding dress? Light & Love

Donna Jones

January 7, 2014 at 5:30 PM

Hi Debbie....well maybe a wedding dress for someone..:-) :-) :-) I wore bluejeans.....:-) :-) and twenty three years ago..:-) :-) :-) thanks for your visit..always glad to see you..I'm working on that bench poem..

Sara Kendrick

January 6, 2014 at 11:20 AM

Great idea in more ways than one..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Donna Jones

January 7, 2014 at 5:28 PM

Thank you Sara....so good to see you..

Mustapha Mohammed

January 5, 2014 at 11:49 PM

Hi Donna, enjoyed perusing your haiku my friend. Love it. All the best in the contest.

Donna Jones

January 7, 2014 at 5:27 PM

Hello Mustapha.....thank you....and thanks for stopping...hope your new year is starting out fantastic!

Nette Onclaud

January 5, 2014 at 9:49 AM

had a little party time with my friends and they were all wearing red, purple.. hah.,i wore black!.. happy sunday, donns!.. huggs

Donna Jones

January 7, 2014 at 5:26 PM

And I know you looked awesome!!!! Happy all week to you nette...

David Williams

January 4, 2014 at 12:58 PM

Donna ah the little black number is always a great sight, excellent…David

Donna Jones

January 4, 2014 at 10:30 PM

Thanks David...they never go out of style I guess..:-) :-)

Richard Lamoureux

January 4, 2014 at 12:36 PM

Good Morning Donna.

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 4, 2014 at 9:23 AM

- Donna, nice haiku - love it!! - Luck in contest!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Donna Jones

January 4, 2014 at 10:29 PM

Thanks Anne Lise...so kind..

Richard Lamoureux

January 3, 2014 at 7:36 PM

Clever girl, it is good to stand out from the rest.

Donna Jones

January 4, 2014 at 10:19 PM

Thanks Richard....I'm ornery that way....:-) :-) :-) :-)

Joseph Sergi

January 3, 2014 at 5:58 PM

Happy New Year Donna! Great way to start the year out nice Haiku

Donna Jones

January 4, 2014 at 10:20 PM

Thank so much Joseph..:-) :-) :-)

Ken Carroll

January 3, 2014 at 5:19 PM

Hi Donna, An intriguing write.. Ken

Donna Jones

January 4, 2014 at 10:20 PM

Appreciate that ken..:-) :-)

Harry Horsman

January 3, 2014 at 4:17 PM

Oh and the mind goes into overdrive here Donna,,,,,Happy New Year to you,,,

Donna Jones

January 4, 2014 at 10:22 PM

Yeah....no telling what I might wear to a fancy party...:-) :-) :-) :-) hehe...thanks Harry....

Nette Onclaud

January 3, 2014 at 2:50 PM

so spot on; a fashionada in the making, donns..love the naughty feel of this one-- very differently conceptualized.. i want the little black dress.. huggs!

Donna Jones

January 4, 2014 at 10:24 PM

And you'd be the bell of the ball too..so pretty...thanks for the nice compliment nette...

Painted Hunter

January 3, 2014 at 2:00 PM

Hey Donna....I wasn't one of the guys in the black suit...haha. Nicely done!

Donna Jones

January 4, 2014 at 10:26 PM

Oh well...real tree is acceptable attire at my parties.:-)better be....bout all I wear..:-) :-)

Russell Sivey

January 2, 2014 at 10:47 PM

This is a fabulous Senryu my friend, I truly loved reading this tremendous poem here this evening! What a remarkable piece, quite the lovely poem, Great Work!!

Donna Jones

January 4, 2014 at 10:27 PM

So very nice Russell..thanks...