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I'Ll Take Something In White

i'll take something in white

men dressed in black suits
little black dresses compete
a girl goes shopping


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Joe Maverick

Date: 2/11/2014 11:08:00 AM

Enjoyed this most colourless write Donna, sharpens the outline no end..'

Dah Dahlusion

Date: 2/3/2014 11:03:00 AM

This is perfection in Haiku. Solid poetic imagery. Bravo, Poet!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/14/2014 12:01:00 PM

hello.. where are you, donnns.. huggs

Jack Horne

Date: 1/12/2014 3:41:00 PM

lovely write here - Congrats on your wins too

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/11/2014 8:22:00 AM

What a lovely way to start the New Year! What girls would be without shopping? Answer: As boring as men! Ha-ha! Beautiful haiku Donna! Thank you!

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 1/8/2014 5:03:00 AM

Yeah new year is starting off great. Not fantastic though : )

Gideon Foli

Date: 1/7/2014 4:01:00 PM

Hi Donna, Congratulation for signing on as a lifetime premium member. Nice and short poem, keep them coming.

Donna Jones
Date: 1/7/2014 5:33:00 PM

Thanks Gideon....appreciate that....

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/7/2014 12:11:00 PM

MD....cute adorable haiku....Just stopping by to give you a nice warm hug. Been sick...so probably not too tight....wouldn't want to give you germies!!! Love ya, MD. You will look great in whatever you wear!

Donna Jones
Date: 1/7/2014 5:32:00 PM

Well...big tight hug back....I'm not afraid of your germies.....thanks for the nice compliment....

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/6/2014 4:03:00 PM

Maybe a wedding dress? Light & Love

Donna Jones
Date: 1/7/2014 5:30:00 PM

Hi Debbie....well maybe a wedding dress for someone..:-) :-) :-) I wore bluejeans.....:-) :-) and twenty three years ago..:-) :-) :-) thanks for your visit..always glad to see you..I'm working on that bench poem..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/6/2014 11:20:00 AM

Great idea in more ways than one..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Donna Jones
Date: 1/7/2014 5:28:00 PM

Thank you Sara....so good to see you..

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 1/5/2014 11:49:00 PM

Hi Donna, enjoyed perusing your haiku my friend. Love it. All the best in the contest.

Donna Jones
Date: 1/7/2014 5:27:00 PM

Hello Mustapha.....thank you....and thanks for stopping...hope your new year is starting out fantastic!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/5/2014 9:49:00 AM

had a little party time with my friends and they were all wearing red, purple.. hah.,i wore black!.. happy sunday, donns!.. huggs

Donna Jones
Date: 1/7/2014 5:26:00 PM

And I know you looked awesome!!!! Happy all week to you nette...

David Williams

Date: 1/4/2014 12:58:00 PM

Donna ah the little black number is always a great sight, excellent…David

Donna Jones
Date: 1/4/2014 10:30:00 PM

Thanks David...they never go out of style I guess..:-) :-)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/4/2014 12:36:00 PM

Good Morning Donna.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/4/2014 9:23:00 AM

- Donna, nice haiku - love it!! - Luck in contest!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Donna Jones
Date: 1/4/2014 10:29:00 PM

Thanks Anne Lise...so kind..

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/3/2014 7:36:00 PM

Clever girl, it is good to stand out from the rest.

Donna Jones
Date: 1/4/2014 10:19:00 PM

Thanks Richard....I'm ornery that way....:-) :-) :-) :-)

Joseph Sergi

Date: 1/3/2014 5:58:00 PM

Happy New Year Donna! Great way to start the year out nice Haiku

Donna Jones
Date: 1/4/2014 10:20:00 PM

Thank so much Joseph..:-) :-) :-)

Ken Carroll

Date: 1/3/2014 5:19:00 PM

Hi Donna, An intriguing write.. Ken

Donna Jones
Date: 1/4/2014 10:20:00 PM

Appreciate that ken..:-) :-)

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/3/2014 4:17:00 PM

Oh and the mind goes into overdrive here Donna,,,,,Happy New Year to you,,,

Donna Jones
Date: 1/4/2014 10:22:00 PM

Yeah....no telling what I might wear to a fancy party...:-) :-) :-) :-) hehe...thanks Harry....

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/3/2014 2:50:00 PM

so spot on; a fashionada in the making, donns..love the naughty feel of this one-- very differently conceptualized.. i want the little black dress.. huggs!

Donna Jones
Date: 1/4/2014 10:24:00 PM

And you'd be the bell of the ball too..so pretty...thanks for the nice compliment nette...

Painted Hunter

Date: 1/3/2014 2:00:00 PM

Hey Donna....I wasn't one of the guys in the black suit...haha. Nicely done!

Donna Jones
Date: 1/4/2014 10:26:00 PM

Oh well...real tree is acceptable attire at my parties.:-)better be....bout all I wear..:-) :-)

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/2/2014 10:47:00 PM

This is a fabulous Senryu my friend, I truly loved reading this tremendous poem here this evening! What a remarkable piece, quite the lovely poem, Great Work!!

Donna Jones
Date: 1/4/2014 10:27:00 PM

So very nice Russell..thanks...