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I'Ll Not Forgive You Till You Ask

I’ll not forgive you, till you ask You who tore my world apart. I wont accept it till you say You pray forgiveness every day Before you see me, take off thy mask Don’t try to call me your sweetheart Until then just stay away, As of now I am not your prey You deceitful heart is now bask You had this masquerade down to an art Breaking hearts was child’s play But now you shall have to pay I’ll not forgive you till you ask But if your lying ways depart And thy conscious begins to sway I will not lead you astray

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Skat A

Date: 4/29/2016 10:47:00 AM

WOW, that is deep. here at the soup, a poet did the unthinkable and ran into the shadows instead of asking for forgiveness, he's a scum so who needs it, anyways good one. SKAT

Amber Bloom
Date: 7/12/2016 8:26:00 PM

Wow, this really touches my heart. Thank you so much. I truly appreciate it- A.B.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/29/2016 6:37:00 AM

Great read Amber...glad to see this read... you should add it under rhyme and not under I don't know... Always. Linda

Michael Whatley

Date: 4/29/2016 5:22:00 AM

Great rhythmic rhyming piece Amber. Well expressed.