I'Ll Catch You When You Fall

Been long time that I've seen you,
& been long time that you've been here,
W/no demands these eyes kept your soul,
Now it's been long that they've felt it at all.

I know its not the easy task they call,
But trust me- I'll catch you when you fall,
I'll pick up the times when you call,
Coz' my eyes keep wandering for your soul.

'Less is more' and that more is what I get,
Your meticulous look makes me forget,
Forget the sorrow that I've been into,
So give me more, and let it come slow.

I know its not the easy task they call,
But trust me- I'll catch you when you fall,
I'll pick up the times when you call,
Coz' my eyes keep wandering for your soul.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/16/2015 12:05:00 AM
Jasmine, Nice Rock me around the clock win. ~Skat~
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Jasmine Choudhary
Date: 2/21/2015 1:16:00 AM
Thank you mate :) -jazz
Date: 2/14/2015 11:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Blessings and Happy Valentine’s Day Eve
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Jasmine Choudhary
Date: 2/21/2015 1:17:00 AM
Aww thank you. #latereply :) -jazz
Date: 12/26/2014 5:14:00 AM
- Warm welcome to P- soup,Jasmine :) - Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year 2015 !!! - // Anne-Lise :)
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Jasmine Choudhary
Date: 12/27/2014 7:41:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise.. I'm all happy to see such warm welcomes :). Merry Christmas (little late :D. Hope it went well), and a Happy New Year! !!:) -Jazz
Date: 12/25/2014 9:13:00 PM
Jasmine, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy being part of the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "In The Moment" in hopes it inspires you to write again. I look forward in following you and your poetry:) Enjoy this site, and the coming New Year! From: your new poet friend@-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/27/2014 7:38:00 AM
Hey thanks a lot Linda for your warm welcome. I'm glad to find out this poetry soup site and more glad to find such friendly poets :). Thank you for the contest invitation, I'll surely be the part of one.Once again thank u for the warm welcome :) -Jazz
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