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I'll catch you when you fall

Been long time that I've seen you,
& been long time that you've been here,
W/no demands these eyes kept your soul,
Now it's been long that they've felt it at all.

I know its not the easy task they call,
But trust me- I'll catch you when you fall,
I'll pick up the times when you call,
Coz' my eyes keep wandering for your soul.

'Less is more' and that more is what I get,
Your meticulous look makes me forget,
Forget the sorrow that I've been into,
So give me more, and let it come slow.

I know its not the easy task they call,
But trust me- I'll catch you when you fall,
I'll pick up the times when you call,
Coz' my eyes keep wandering for your soul.


Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/20/2015 4:33:00 PM
Jasmine.. I dig your winning write!
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Jasmine Choudhary
Date: 2/21/2015 1:16:00 AM
Thank you much :) -jazz
Date: 2/16/2015 12:05:00 AM
Jasmine, Nice Rock me around the clock win. ~Skat~
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Jasmine Choudhary
Date: 2/21/2015 1:16:00 AM
Thank you mate :) -jazz
Date: 2/14/2015 11:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Blessings and Happy Valentine’s Day Eve
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Jasmine Choudhary
Date: 2/21/2015 1:17:00 AM
Aww thank you. #latereply :) -jazz
Date: 12/29/2014 11:10:00 AM
Hi Jasmine.. powerful, well constructed write, my friend. Poetry Soup is a great place to display your creative, artist works. It's also an ideal place to meet and be shaped by other poets. Comment on their works and they will comment on yours. Give the contest a try as well. I look forward to reading more good writes in 2015.. HAPPY NEW YEAR! Please take time to check me out!
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Jasmine Choudhary
Date: 2/21/2015 1:18:00 AM
Thankyou mate. A little out of time I'm. And you're superb. :) -jazz
Date: 12/26/2014 5:14:00 AM
- Warm welcome to P- soup,Jasmine :) - Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year 2015 !!! - // Anne-Lise :)
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Jasmine Choudhary
Date: 12/27/2014 7:41:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise.. I'm all happy to see such warm welcomes :). Merry Christmas (little late :D. Hope it went well), and a Happy New Year! !!:) -Jazz
Date: 12/25/2014 9:13:00 PM
Jasmine, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy being part of the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "In The Moment" in hopes it inspires you to write again. I look forward in following you and your poetry:) Enjoy this site, and the coming New Year! From: your new poet friend@-> LINDA <-@
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Jasmine Choudhary
Date: 12/27/2014 7:38:00 AM
Hey thanks a lot Linda for your warm welcome. I'm glad to find out this poetry soup site and more glad to find such friendly poets :). Thank you for the contest invitation, I'll surely be the part of one.Once again thank u for the warm welcome :) -Jazz