I'Ll Catch You When You Fall

Been long time that I've seen you,
& been long time that you've been here,
W/no demands these eyes kept your soul,
Now it's been long that they've felt it at all.

I know its not the easy task they call,
But trust me- I'll catch you when you fall,
I'll pick up the times when you call,
Coz' my eyes keep wandering for your soul.

'Less is more' and that more is what I get,
Your meticulous look makes me forget,
Forget the sorrow that I've been into,
So give me more, and let it come slow.

I know its not the easy task they call,
But trust me- I'll catch you when you fall,
I'll pick up the times when you call,
Coz' my eyes keep wandering for your soul.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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February 16, 2015 at 12:05 AM
Jasmine, Nice Rock me around the clock win. ~Skat~
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February 21, 2015 at 1:16 AM
Thank you mate :) -jazz
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February 14, 2015 at 11:04 AM
Congratulations on your win. Blessings and Happy Valentine’s Day Eve
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February 21, 2015 at 1:17 AM
Aww thank you. #latereply :) -jazz
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December 26, 2014 at 5:14 AM
- Warm welcome to P- soup,Jasmine :) - Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year 2015 !!! - // Anne-Lise :)
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December 27, 2014 at 7:41 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise.. I'm all happy to see such warm welcomes :). Merry Christmas (little late :D. Hope it went well), and a Happy New Year! !!:) -Jazz
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December 25, 2014 at 9:13 PM
Jasmine, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy being part of the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "In The Moment" in hopes it inspires you to write again. I look forward in following you and your poetry:) Enjoy this site, and the coming New Year! From: your new poet friend@-> LINDA <-@
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December 27, 2014 at 7:38 AM
Hey thanks a lot Linda for your warm welcome. I'm glad to find out this poetry soup site and more glad to find such friendly poets :). Thank you for the contest invitation, I'll surely be the part of one.Once again thank u for the warm welcome :) -Jazz
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