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I'Ll Build a Castle

If I have the time I'll build a castle, And shape it to fit the home of her dreams. I'll make it of rock and solid oak beams - Then I'll say shyly, "It was no hassle ". If that does not do it, I'll think again, Then take her flying around this planet. I'll carve "I love you" in solid granite So she may see I'm a man among men. Perhaps I should just buy her some roses So she will see the tender side of me. While I practice saying that , "I love thee" We could smell the flowers and touch noses. Thoughts of her inspire me to a great height. Perhaps we'll see a movie that's playing. I could buy popcorn while I am paying, And hold her hand when they turn down the light 12-12-19 Contest : If You Have The Time For An Enclosed Rhyme Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Date: 1/12/2020 9:32:00 AM
WoW! Larry, I found this engaging poem to be, so romantic and well written. The guy in this poem is “any” lady’s dream guy. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/12/2020 5:33:00 AM
Larry, congratulations on your first place win in the contest, this was very romantic and a beautiful poem!
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Date: 12/12/2019 10:00:00 PM
Larry, what a heartfelt gorgeous enclosed rhyme. Good luck in the contest!
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 12/12/2019 10:03:00 PM
You are always very kind, Caren..Thank you

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