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I'Ll Be Your Girl For All Season

I'll be your girl for the spring time when the flowers are in bloom, we'll wonder through the meadow, strolling hand and hand to smell the sweet perfumes, of the flowers and every night I'll hold you tight underneath the April moon light. I'll be your girl for all 4 seasons all the way through, because I'd love to be everything for you. I'll be your girl for the summer, so we can walk on the beach and play in the sand together. We'll spend the days together maken love and getting a tan, on the beach at sun set we'll be strolling hand and hand. I'll be your girl for all four season's all the way through, because I love to be everything for you. I'll be your girl for all four season's during the fall and if you fall down, I will pick you back up. I'll be your girl during the season of winter, when the snow falls on the ground so we can cuddle by the fire, and keep each other warm, so you'll know I will always be around. I'll be your girl for all four season's all the year through. 

By Julie McKoon
I hope it sounds like a poem now.
I do try, to make sense.

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John Fleming Date: 10/28/2016 3:18:00 AM Hello Julie. I really do like this beautiful poem you have penned here; I have to say I agree with Victor: All your poem needs is a little editing to make it a really great poem - The first paragraph rhymes very nicely! Perhaps you could change "holding hand in hand" for "strolling hand in hand"? I feel a little subtle change here and there would really benefit this fine little poem! My very warmest regards, Julie. :) john P.s A seven! Login to Reply

Tera Brown Date: 10/15/2016 10:57:00 AM Good Poem Julie Mckoon, Keep up the good work.... Login to Reply