Tim Smith Poet Free verse

I'Ll Be Missing You

One last kiss of your ruby lips

one more touch of your loving hand

my eyes they are red and misty

and my heart begins to cry

I know it's not for forever

but it still hurts to say goodbye

You'll be living deep inside of me

in every breath that I will take

I'll hold you nightly in my dreams

and think of you when I wake

I'll count the hours til I see you

when you're finally by my side

I'll never let you leave me

when you become my blushing bride

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Cecilia Macfarlane July 30, 2015 at 9:04 PM Tim....this is so sweet and touching, a true romantic you are! Excellent write! Hugs

Charmaine Chircop July 27, 2015 at 1:37 AM This is extremely romantic ,with a deep feeling and longing,ending with a happily ever after..A fav! Enchanting !

Andrea Dietrich July 23, 2015 at 11:47 PM ahh, so romantic. this one written two days ago. So I think I can see it!! Not in my contest,right? Tim Smith July 24, 2015 at 1:26 AM Right...neither one in the contest

Carol Eastman July 21, 2015 at 9:41 AM Very beautiful write...

Anne-Lise Andresen July 20, 2015 at 2:11 PM - A bond of love should never be tied up .... lovely my friend Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis July 20, 2015 at 7:32 AM Tim, you have conquered her heart for evermore! What a tenderly romantic poem!

Skat A July 19, 2015 at 4:50 PM such a beautiful write

Nette Onclaud July 19, 2015 at 12:54 PM you made me sigh, tim... dreamy, dreamy work!.. huggs

Kp Nunez July 19, 2015 at 11:36 AM Such a sweet and romantic write, Tim. Here's hoping it happens soon! :-)

Harry Horsman July 19, 2015 at 9:17 AM love the sincerity here Tim, wonderful poetry...

Ken Carroll July 18, 2015 at 11:28 PM Nice work Tim..I enjoyed the read!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 18, 2015 at 9:56 PM Great romantic write Tim! Adorable !

Alexis Y. July 18, 2015 at 6:36 PM Tim, this is such a heartfelt romantic.I enjoyed every word and every verse. Good job! :-)Alexis

Jan Allison July 18, 2015 at 6:16 PM oh another romantic write flows from your pen Tim:-) Hugs jan xx