Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

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I'll Be Back, Sweetheart

i walked
my darling
to heaven’s gate
i had to leave him
at the door

i was told
in no uncertain terms
to scoot
head back
must wait my turn

so just like that
i kissed him
and left my darling
safe at heaven’s door



AP: 3rd place 2022, Honorable Mention 2021

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Krish Radhakrishna March 20, 2021 at 6:23 AM This is beautiful! Very nicely done! touching! feel the pain! Line Gauthier March 20, 2021 at 11:02 AM Thank you so much, Krish ~ most appreciated

Sara Kendrick February 23, 2021 at 2:37 PM Sad one. We know that our loved ones are in a better place if they have made the reservation. Your presence at my page was delightful. Sara Line Gauthier February 23, 2021 at 4:09 PM Thanks, Sara. Much appreciated ~