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i walked my darling to heaven’s gate i had to leave him at the door i was told in no uncertain terms to scoot head back must wait my turn so just like that i kissed him and left my darling safe at heaven’s door AP: 3rd place 2022, Honorable Mention 2021 Posted on February 23, 2021

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Date: 3/20/2021 6:23:00 AM
This is beautiful! Very nicely done! touching! feel the pain!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/20/2021 11:02:00 AM
Thank you so much, Krish ~ most appreciated
Date: 2/23/2021 2:37:00 PM
Sad one. We know that our loved ones are in a better place if they have made the reservation. Your presence at my page was delightful. Sara
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Date: 2/23/2021 4:09:00 PM
Thanks, Sara. Much appreciated ~

Book: Shattered Sighs