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stuck to bed nerves are dead no dopamine no vitamin aching body weakened, naughty can't lift a flesh nor move a mesh soul in ash

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Christopher Flaherty

Date: 8/17/2020 5:04:00 PM

ill , sic Love this Dido , Dido If long enough gone undiagnosed or untreated leads to bed sores and paralysis And eventually the will to live itself or carry on. Cheers regards Chris

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 8/20/2020 2:44:00 PM

I just call it now Dido Monday through Sunday Or when i wake up

Literary Waves
Date: 8/19/2020 4:00:00 AM

it is part of life. sometimes we feel good, sometimes we feel bad. but this feeling, when you can't lift yourself is hard.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/23/2020 5:25:00 PM

Makes me think of death without the benefit of being dead. Viscerally affecting ink; well done. ~Maureen

Literary Waves
Date: 8/8/2020 5:50:00 PM

true