Ill

stuck to bed
nerves are dead
no dopamine
no vitamin

aching body
weakened, naughty



can't lift a flesh
nor move a mesh
soul in ash
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Flaherty Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 5:04 PM
ill , sic Love this Dido , Dido If long enough gone undiagnosed or untreated leads to bed sores and paralysis And eventually the will to live itself or carry on. Cheers regards Chris
Flaherty Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 2:44 PM
I just call it now Dido Monday through Sunday Or when i wake up
Waves Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 4:00 AM
it is part of life. sometimes we feel good, sometimes we feel bad. but this feeling, when you can't lift yourself is hard.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 5:25 PM
Makes me think of death without the benefit of being dead. Viscerally affecting ink; well done. ~Maureen
Waves Avatar
August 8, 2020 at 5:50 PM
true
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