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Il Fiore Della Bruma P3

Eyes are a beauty like no other, Where your deepest sense shines like lustrous glass; The perfect crystal structure, A divine un-shattered over easeful stars. Today I looked upon the light. Today I woke from a heavy slumber With memory much the same as dreams, Blinds had been lifted, And I draw my stillness Towards the feathered window release. I pour each breath to this outside air; The calmly gaze of the soulful sky May catch them, with wings extended backwards, Embracing the pure and loyal tide. The gentle hope of a heart. Oh, draw in these breaths, A delicate mixture of a transcendent draught, Imbued with the devoted kiss of the echoing lake: Cooled and tranquil to delve. And lunar rush, tender compassion; Both wild and soothing, As the forever bond of eternal arms. This draught I mix, uncork and bubble Lulled and sweet, foamed over-flowing, Gently poured, in reflection of sunburnt oak And drunk in loyal acceptance. May my hands never depart From the shores of your warmth And with sight fixed to a beauty like no other, And with a flame in heart: Today I looked upon the light of words I love you… Hope you don’t read that and feel awkward…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/12/2013 11:32:00 AM
Great complimentary winning work..Sara
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Date: 10/10/2013 6:32:00 AM
Congrats for the first place win in the contest, Aiden
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Date: 10/9/2013 10:40:00 AM
Aiden the poem is off the wall and beautiful.... Congratulations on your deserved winning poem. Perfectly complimented by your pen. Have a nice day. xox~ LINDA
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Date: 10/7/2013 5:57:00 PM
Wow....beautiful....much deserved win..congratulations
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Date: 10/7/2013 5:43:00 PM
Vey beautiful , congratulations' , a well deserved win !
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Date: 10/7/2013 10:12:00 AM
This takes one's breath away......it is so beautiful. I'm honored to share this placement with you, Aiden
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Date: 9/17/2013 11:43:00 AM
This is beautiful , no one should feel awkward with " I love you " ;)
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Aiden Asoll
Date: 9/21/2013 2:25:00 AM
Thankyou :) "I love you" is a message we both take seriously so it was the greatest feeling when I woke up to that.

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