Ii Am Your Spiritual Twin

I don’t love you
just because of your eyes,
gentler than the summer rays.
I don’t love you
just because of your hair
that fondles my dreams.
I don’t love you
just because of your body
a masterpiece of the divine hand!
I love you best
because of your heart
at the moment after sunrise
on that sunny beach.
When you kissed me 
and whispered,
‘I’m your spiritual twin!’"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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September 15, 2026 at 7:50 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Agustin Avatar
March 29, 2024 at 7:37 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 12:15 AM
Slavyan, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 7:00 AM
Slavyan,, awesome write! I enjoyed reading this poem. Skat
Hyler Avatar
May 14, 2014 at 10:35 AM
Thank you for sharing:) It touched my heart
A   Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 9:02 AM
Slavyan. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda
Andresen Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 11:45 PM
- It's not quite the way it works, you need to: Provide comments to regain comments. - I unfortunately can not go into f.book your page I do not have face book. - (Gossip book, I call it :) :) -) - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Shines Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 1:35 PM
nice write and enjoyed reading it.
Andresen Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 1:47 AM
Slavyan, a enjoyable poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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