Iho Trixie Bee

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It's Just A Season! – Writing your first novel-Things you should know

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*Image of It's Just A Season! by Things You Should Know IHO Trixie Bee We came to the world of Calendars where seasons were met by challengers February January Feb dreamed of shifting on with Spring though Jan deemed Winter a great thing December agree that Winter should be Nine months joined in conversation and viewed Feb's news, a poor sensation "No happy ever after", Feb state. (Hears), "Sleep Snow White for Spring must wait." *'Trixie Bee', a new poetry form invented by Caren Krutsinger This poem must tell a story; it must be fantasy. First stanza: 9a, 9a, 4b, 4b Second stanza: 8c, 8c, 5d, 5d Third stanza: 8e, 9e, 9f, 8f HMS & RZ checked 2021 August 15

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2021 2:13:00 PM

LOVE your example poem. It's very cute, William, personifying the winter months. Thanks so much for my last win with you.

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/16/2021 2:37:00 PM

Sweet -- as the boys had said, I believe it means, 'exceptionally grand' --, Andrea, for you to say, also, I'm happy for having you and others partake in my first inventive poetry format my friend, Aloha!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 8/15/2021 5:40:00 PM

Superb, William. Caren will be soooo proud. I wrote a Trixie Bee, too. It's more difficult than it looks, right?

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/15/2021 6:05:00 PM

A hearty thanks and for batting for me, Milt, and I concur that you ring an air of truth, but I had fun my friend, Aloha!