William Kelii Kekaula Poet Rhyme

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Iho Trixie Bee

*Image of It's Just A Season! by Things You Should Know
IHO Trixie Bee

We came to the world of Calendars
where seasons were met by challengers
February
January

Feb dreamed of shifting on with Spring
though Jan deemed Winter a great thing
December agree
that Winter should be

Nine months joined in conversation
and viewed Feb's news, a poor sensation
"No happy ever after", Feb state.
(Hears), "Sleep Snow White for Spring must wait."

*'Trixie Bee', a new poetry form invented by Caren Krutsinger
This poem must tell a story; it must be fantasy.
First stanza: 9a, 9a, 4b, 4b
Second stanza: 8c, 8c, 5d, 5d
Third stanza: 8e, 9e, 9f, 8f
HMS & RZ checked

2021 August 15

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Andrea Dietrich August 16, 2021 at 2:13 PM LOVE your example poem. It's very cute, William, personifying the winter months. Thanks so much for my last win with you. William Kelii Kekaula August 16, 2021 at 2:37 PM Sweet -- as the boys had said, I believe it means, 'exceptionally grand' --, Andrea, for you to say, also, I'm happy for having you and others partake in my first inventive poetry format my friend, Aloha!

L Milton Hankins August 15, 2021 at 5:40 PM Superb, William. Caren will be soooo proud. I wrote a Trixie Bee, too. It's more difficult than it looks, right? William Kelii Kekaula August 15, 2021 at 6:05 PM A hearty thanks and for batting for me, Milt, and I concur that you ring an air of truth, but I had fun my friend, Aloha!