If Your Shadows Become a Green

When I paid attention..
Your shadows, became
Like September leaves 
Shaken by the wind..
Such as affectionate butterflies
On windows..
Raises sometimes quietly
And folded sometimes! 
, 
Oh..if your shadows..
Become a green from shed tears..; 
I will make from my eyes springs!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dey Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 7:10 AM
Dear Fatima;this is so good and i like the springs in your eyes.Well penned
May Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 9:39 PM
very nicely written Fatima.....Joseph
Lamoureux Avatar
November 8, 2013 at 10:55 PM
This is a very cool piece. I enjoyed reading it. Shadows like September leaves, a most poetic thought!
Nusairat Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 5:46 PM
Thank you so much dear Richard
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