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If You Would Know

We run behind you Kill your love on the Sixteenth Street square Playing the dirty game If you would know, my friend -that they are like me! They call for war Make a dam on new hope Can not bear your smile Your free will and self-reliance They are dying to die My friend; if you would know -that they love you more than I do! Now you may reject me But can not overcome them If you would know, my friend -that they are among us Sit beside you walk in the crowds They bear the same human features, You will feel sorry to know that They do not want to be human anymore!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/15/2014 5:27:00 PM
A very moving and powerful ode, Litan. Well done! Congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem.
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Date: 1/14/2014 6:27:00 AM
, A fine Ode and congratulations on the fine winLitan
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Date: 1/13/2014 2:26:00 PM
LITAN, :) CONGRATS.... Love ~ SKAT~
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Date: 10/9/2013 1:22:00 AM
ok, I got your message on Kelly!!
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Date: 10/7/2013 3:13:00 AM
Friends for your kind information,i use the name kelly as the theme of my dream and i really don't know who is she.Please don't mind if any kelly is there in the soup.Thanks for your visit to my poems
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Date: 10/6/2013 6:41:00 PM
Just one question...was this poem written about me, or some other "Kelly"?...However, it makes no difference who this was written for! I enjoyed reading it! Sometimes people are not what they seem. We should never judge a book by it's cover. Great work, Litan!
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Date: 10/6/2013 6:45:00 AM
Wooow .... a powerful poem Litan! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/6/2013 1:37:00 AM
wow, Lintan epic, and it runs its own course. this is a deep verse to send Kelly's wsy...enjoyed- Linda
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Date: 10/6/2013 12:52:00 AM
An interesting poem here. it makes me very curious to know why you used the name Kelly and how personal it was!
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Date: 10/7/2013 3:16:00 AM
Dear friend....zero personal.she does not exist
Date: 10/6/2013 12:30:00 AM
An awesome write my dear friend Litan. i enjoyed reading it this afternoon. Thank you so much for sharing and also for your visit & nice comments on my work. Have a great day! love and hugs, Leonora
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