If You Were the Sun

To what do I owe this pleasure dear Sir
I'm seriously longing to bid you hello
if you were the Sun in my path, I'd confer 
before the last ray of night loses glow

I'd guide you to roses of beauty and grace 
then write you a poem in eloquent style 
by a waterfall fountain we'd sit and enlace   
while the sun shines above all the while 

May I lean on your shoulder and may I draw near   
for a sweet little sonnet of love and romance   
can we sit in the garden where roses bloom dear  
and soak in the beauty of a morning's, slow dance

To what do we owe this rare moment of day,  
perhaps to a glance, from a heart throb away.    

July 5, 2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 7/6/2021 1:51:00 PM
Mystic Rose Rose, Such a fine Sonnet in 'If You Were The Sun'. Enjoyed the feeling in your word rhyme's romance; and 'morning's slow dance'. Encore. -Richard
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Date: 7/6/2021 12:06:00 PM
Love this! Awesome write. God bless you friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 7/6/2021 11:26:00 AM
Dreamy
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Date: 7/6/2021 10:58:00 AM
The sweetness of your words.. the charm of your love.. the bliss of the moments in time.. the grace of Nature.. the eloquence of your poetry.. What a stunning Sonnet, dear Rose! You have taken my soul to a sweet spot.. thank you so much for carving such a glowing gem! My warmest wishes. God bless you. Love and hugs.
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Date: 7/6/2021 4:53:00 AM
Much enjoyed the sweet tone of your poem. A charming, delightful write, Vienna.
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Date: 7/5/2021 10:39:00 PM
A rare moment indeed. There is much imagery and emotion in this poem.
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Date: 7/5/2021 9:57:00 PM
Lovely poem to start the day with....Delice
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Date: 7/5/2021 9:40:00 PM
Wow! I love this one, Vie, faving it:)
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Date: 7/5/2021 8:04:00 PM
A relaxing "Feel Good" write Vie--we need that these days with all else swirling about.
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Date: 7/5/2021 4:28:00 PM
Exquisite sonnet, Mystic Rose Rose. Sure did enjoy it...a romantic moment, indeed.
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