If You Try








When the night arrives beating its wings fiercely like the first real storm, you can knock down the stars of heaven with one blow if you try.
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Gifford Avatar
October 29, 2024 at 4:38 AM
Wow Rose, after reading this I took some of its power to ignore my aching ankle and got on my bike. (Mind over matter) Brilliant piece, my friend. Enjoy your day.
Sharma  Avatar
October 28, 2024 at 2:04 AM
Ohh, the power this one portrays is absolutely phenomenal! Such a fierce micro this is, dear Rose... your words are always enriched with poetic depth and wisdom ~ one can truly knock down those satiric stars of blinding night, with strong will and belief. Loved reading your craft always! Sending light and best wishes...
Rose  Avatar
October 28, 2024 at 8:09 AM
I'm glad you saw the braveness in this, must mean you are one of the braves dear poet :)
Cunningham Avatar
October 28, 2024 at 1:22 AM
So true Vie, the mind is more powerful than you know. Tom
Rose  Avatar
October 28, 2024 at 8:09 AM
Yes it is Tom, no telling what we are capable of until we are put to the test :)
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