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If You Try

When the night arrives beating its wings fiercely like the first real storm, you can knock down the stars of heaven with one blow if you try.

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Zyrool Gifford

Date: 10/29/2024 4:38:00 AM

Wow Rose, after reading this I took some of its power to ignore my aching ankle and got on my bike. (Mind over matter) Brilliant piece, my friend. Enjoy your day.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/28/2024 2:04:00 AM

Ohh, the power this one portrays is absolutely phenomenal! Such a fierce micro this is, dear Rose... your words are always enriched with poetic depth and wisdom ~ one can truly knock down those satiric stars of blinding night, with strong will and belief. Loved reading your craft always! Sending light and best wishes...

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 10/28/2024 8:09:00 AM

I'm glad you saw the braveness in this, must mean you are one of the braves dear poet :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/28/2024 1:22:00 AM

So true Vie, the mind is more powerful than you know. Tom

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 10/28/2024 8:09:00 AM

Yes it is Tom, no telling what we are capable of until we are put to the test :)