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If You Still Want To Hear From Me

Without you,my life is colorless   Breathing is difficult without your presence
If you still want to want to hear from me  if you're not feared from me
Put a comma after my last sentence and if,you want to stop my breath put a dot

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/29/2015 2:25:00 PM
,,, very nice! I want to hear from you
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