Reason A. Poteet Poet Rhyme

If You Only Knew

hexastich with rhyme

I drink my coffee standing on alert
knowing that my tasks move this chunk of dirt
on its axis... my world, my family.
Of necessity, I grab at moments
attacking life (with God) at faith's expense
wringing out each ounce of kids' energy.

I am a mother raising young children
as a chef, cop, coach, and comedienne.
Past these headwinds, I see in the distance -
a doting old grandma, coffee in her hands
Bible in her lap, waiting in the stands
sharing words worthy of God's remembrance.

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Paula Goldsmith May 19, 2024 at 1:14 PM WOW!!! Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/story. We wear many hats to keep the family/life running. Great Ending... Enjoy your day, enjoy your win.................. Reason A. Poteet June 12, 2024 at 7:06 AM I welcome your comments always, Paula. So many women, though married still, must do most of the raising of the children alone. I praise those "special" single moms. Thanks for your encouragement.

Silent One May 19, 2024 at 11:15 AM Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Reason A. Poteet May 21, 2024 at 6:37 PM Thank you, Silent One, always appreciate the encouragement and support from a placement in your varied contests. Have a marvelous Memorial Day, remembering the sacrifice of so many in our country.