If You Looked At Me Like That

I would be the luckiest man on earth.
Heaven would open up and show me my rebirth.
Love is for the emptiness that fills my heart.
If you looked at me like that I'd never part.

The hours in the day just seem to slip away.
Sailing with this empty cargo just leaves me at bay.
All tied up and turned about, no mate to keep me straight.
If my prayer gets answered, I hope it's not too late.

Every time I see you I see love.
I get lost in the crowd of push and shove.
I give into the fear and disappear.
What I want to say, I'm not sure you want to hear.

I look for hope in a house of despair.
I reach for you, but your just not there.
I'm amazed at how time just keeps on going.
As I sit here all alone with no one knowing.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Squyres Avatar
December 28, 2011 at 9:20 AM
I've seen that look in anothers eyes, directed in my direction. He loved me as I was, not looking for perfection. This we shared for many years, now all that's left is shedding tears....and memories that chase the fears. May you find it in your lifetime.
Uchacz Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 6:38 PM
But in the end you will never see the loving pair i wish we could be through thoughts and sorrow i hope you hit me with your love arrow lol don't know, you're amazing keep writing :)
Wesley Avatar
September 11, 2011 at 5:49 PM
I've been looking at someone like that but he doesn't see the message in my eyes. It's so sad when the storm doesn't carry both together. But he's older, maybe too old.
Wesley Avatar
September 9, 2011 at 7:08 PM
If you have a temporary (hope) writer's block, I will be here to read them all again. As you know, I do love your verses and the tales you tell and the romantic ones are always so special.
Kendrick Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 2:43 PM
Your poetic comments were uplifting. Enjoyed reading your poem..I hope that if this is just a topic and not your life. If your life, I hope that the perfect lady soon arrives..Enjoyed reading today..Sara
Kearley Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 1:40 PM
Robert,well that made me sad.Very nice! But it made me sad. :-(
Kearley Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 1:39 PM
Robert,well that made me sad.Very nice! But it made me sad. :-(
Dietrich Avatar
August 5, 2011 at 9:58 PM
seems you have a very romantic heart, robert. Nicely done! Let's see more now....
Wesley Avatar
August 5, 2011 at 12:29 AM
Robert, you pull at the heartstrings, I hope it isn't about you! A sad but gentle verse.
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