If You Listen Closely

Nothing is as important as being present
In your own life.
But for some,
Life sometimes becomes submerged
Beneath the dark waters of a secret place,
No longer able to remember the past,
Incapable of holding on to the present.
And sometimes,
On a quiet night,
If you listen closely,
You might hear those old imprisoned souls
Screaming in silence
That life is a hell of a thing
To happen to a person.


Author's note: This is for a couple of friends who are struggling with early-onset dementia.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Bowring Avatar
January 12, 2024 at 8:19 AM
Such a touching, heartfelt poem Jim and so well written. So poignant, so profound, ’Beneath the dark waters of a secret place’ ‘ You might hear those old imprisoned souls’ - a real impact! Sorry to hear your friends are sadly affected too. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you.
Slaughter Avatar
January 12, 2024 at 10:10 AM
Thank you, Christina.
Boles Avatar
January 5, 2024 at 2:40 PM
it's tragic when someone gets affected and have one's mind snatched and eroded by this disease. My sister passed away just recently from Alzheimer's. A powerful write Jim...anselmo
Slaughter Avatar
January 6, 2024 at 10:10 AM
Thank you, Anselmo, and sorry for your loss.
One Avatar
January 5, 2024 at 2:27 PM
I'm sorry to hear about your friends and I agree with your sentiments..
Slaughter Avatar
January 6, 2024 at 10:10 AM
Thanks, S O.
M  Avatar
January 5, 2024 at 10:47 AM
Wow Jim this is a real beauty! Poignant and meaningful! Great title, great poem! Im listening closely! Debx
Slaughter Avatar
January 5, 2024 at 11:02 AM
Thank you, Deb.
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