If You Go Down To the Streets

if you go down to the streets today
beware of the frozen ground
if you go down to the streets today
you're sure to go slippin' around

for all the snow so pretty last night
has gathered there and turned into 
ice
Today's the day you need claws on 
your footsies.

winter time is such lovely fun
with snowflakes dancing in the light
watch them, catch them
challenge friends in snowball fight
you can sleigh, you can ski,  print 
angels in snow
"Till the cold and the wind come like 
thieves in the night
and a fire and your bed fill your heart 
with delight

it's cold down there in the streets 
today
it's better to stay at home
it's vile down there in the streets 
today
It's safer to stay at home.

the icy winds got spiteful alone
and turned pavements to soapy 
stone
and getting around is sure to be no 
picnic
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Hendricks Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 2:52 PM
Snow in South Africa? Hahaha. Nice debut poem, my friend. I look forward to reading more of your works. Licia :-)
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November 20, 2013 at 11:03 AM
Find warmth here in the soup, hehehe.... Great piece! Keep on my friend
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November 19, 2013 at 11:06 PM
Stephen, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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November 17, 2013 at 9:39 AM
Stephen, I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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November 17, 2013 at 8:28 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Stephen! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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