If You Could Say Now What You Didn'T Say Then

Face to face And do or die You can never have done Things to say had fade But somehow, somewhere Today boldness has changed Misdeed or mistake For right now to date Openly is no longer reserved “IFs” are as good as done Because the heart desires For real life ….is love And love forever between you and me!
Dalila G Agtani 9/5/11 Entered in a Contest Sponsored By Michael J Falotico Contest: If You Could Say Now What You Did Not Say Then
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Dietrich Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 10:20 PM
I agree with Jack, this has a lovely finish. Saying what you honestly want. and my poem was based on a real experience when I was 17, ages ago, but a beautiful night in a young girl's life.
Ross Jr. Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 4:26 PM
Oh by the way Lovely lady...good luck on contest....with love.....old Jack
Ross Jr. Avatar
September 5, 2011 at 4:25 PM
Wonderful write lovely Lady Dalila love the finish because the heart sesires for real life is love.....with love........old Jack
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