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If You Could

If You could See me now Writing the words As you liked to do Filling the blank pages Writing affirmations too Old thoughts, evolving to new ones From the last day, that I could see you From where I flew from then, to how I grew Heidi Sands 9/25/17

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James Horn

Date: 9/28/2017 6:40:00 AM

Did Grew From Tree That was tall I seemed small A blue sky Who on rely Until day do die God only knows why

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/28/2017 7:37:00 AM

Thank you for your comment James :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/26/2017 7:16:00 AM

This is a wonderful Etheree my friend! I think that these forms can be tricky sometimes, the can catch you off guard and make you change half your poem if you aren't careful! I surely loved reading it this morning! Such a grand piece, Great Work!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/26/2017 7:29:00 AM

Thank you so much Russell :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/25/2017 4:50:00 PM

Such a lovely etheree Heidi about your personal growth, and I feel, for someone you were close to and wish was still here with you on Earth. Your poem felt very intimate to me in that way. I love etherees as you may have noticed on my page, I've written them as much as I've written pantoums lol! A great etheree Heidi. Loved it :)

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/25/2017 5:23:00 PM

Everyday, every hour, every minute, your angel in Heaven sees all that you do and showers joy and love upon you... :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/25/2017 4:54:00 PM

Hi Susan. Thank you. Yes, Etheree poems are fun. I have done some Pantoum, although find them to be more difficult. You are right, this is about someone in heaven who I lost.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/25/2017 4:10:00 PM

Sentiments well expressed--lovely poem!

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/25/2017 4:37:00 PM

Thank you so much Vijay :)

Joseph May

Date: 9/25/2017 3:45:00 PM

Very nice etheree Heidi..best wishes

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/25/2017 3:47:00 PM

Thank you Joseph. Etheree are fun to do :)