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If you are not close to me

If you are not close to me...... Can I start my day without you my love Your absence in my house dries me out I have become my own shadow in my house and its makes me to draw in a ocean of sadness Day after days and night after nights my thirst of love brings me nothing but tears I silently think you from a distance and I feel your love throws at me with helpless If the ocean were not in love then the waves will have no strength If the sun were not in love then the lights will have no brightness If the moon were not in love then the nights will have no romance If the wind were not in love then the music will have no voice So, my love if you were not close to me my life will be in dreary. Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved @ 2018 - Ravi Sathasivam

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Date: 11/14/2018 3:36:00 AM
Ravi.. I satule you sir. Your stirring romantic write is incredible!
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Date: 10/2/2018 1:20:00 PM
This is so beautiful and so sweet, your love for someone is so imminent through your words I can feel it, looking for more. God bless.
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Date: 9/25/2018 2:19:00 PM
Longing for love, brings out the best in us, Ravi...great write my friend...love & light...^WW^
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/30/2018 2:56:00 AM
Thanks for your valuable comment my dear friend. Very much appreciated.
Date: 9/24/2018 12:35:00 AM
- A deep and sad poem, Ravi - You've described your feelings so alive - Sorry, I have not been to "soup" lately ... I posted a poem yesterday - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/30/2018 2:57:00 AM
Thanks for your valuable comment my dear friend. Very much appreciated. Hugs xxxx
Date: 9/23/2018 11:12:00 PM
Intense feeling looking at us in every line ... Beautiful write, romantically fine ...
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Date: 9/30/2018 2:57:00 AM
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Date: 9/22/2018 9:14:00 PM
Beautiful one indeed...
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Date: 9/30/2018 2:58:00 AM
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Date: 9/18/2018 6:11:00 PM
heartfelt read from your golden pen, ravi... this is a beauty!...huggs
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Date: 9/30/2018 2:58:00 AM
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Date: 9/17/2018 5:50:00 PM
The many ways you expressed love in your poem.. make quite an impact on the meaning of the word. Well done, Ravi.
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Date: 9/30/2018 2:58:00 AM
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Date: 9/15/2018 11:57:00 AM
Hi Ravi...you tackle love, absence and longing with a delightful pen, my friend. Best regards // paul
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Date: 9/30/2018 2:58:00 AM
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Date: 9/14/2018 12:25:00 PM
Nicely done, Ravi, so much emotion in your poem of loving hurt needing your love one near. Love brings life to everyone. Thank you for your loving condolence. Hugs eve
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Date: 9/30/2018 2:58:00 AM
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Date: 9/13/2018 8:52:00 PM
This reminds me of the songs of Solomon. A masterful piece.
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Date: 9/30/2018 2:58:00 AM
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Date: 9/13/2018 4:12:00 PM
romantic one, Ravi. I enjoyed this.
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Date: 9/30/2018 2:58:00 AM
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Date: 9/13/2018 11:28:00 AM
Truly a sad lament Ravi, well done...
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/30/2018 2:59:00 AM
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Date: 9/13/2018 8:27:00 AM
A poem of longing in the absence of a loved one..Nicely penned Ravi
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Date: 9/30/2018 2:59:00 AM
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Date: 9/13/2018 3:16:00 AM
If we are not in Love, there will be no Life! Love is the motion that triggers the soul to rejoice in bliss.. Love is the essence of the soul's existence.. a wonderful Light Verse! A pleasure to read. Best regards. Be blessed always.
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Date: 9/30/2018 2:59:00 AM
Thanks for your valuable comment my dear friend. Very much appreciated.