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If You Are Not Close To Me

If you are not close to me......

Can I start my day without you my love
Your absence in my house dries me out
I have become my own shadow in my house
and its makes me to draw in a ocean of sadness
Day after days and night after nights
my thirst of love brings me nothing but tears
I silently think you from a distance
and I feel your love throws at me with helpless
If the ocean were not in love
then the waves will have no strength
If the sun were not in love
then the lights will have no brightness
If the moon were not in love
then the nights will have no romance
If the wind were not in love
then the music will have no voice
So, my love if you were not close to me
my life will be in dreary.

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
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Lyric Man Date: 11/14/2018 3:36:00 AM Ravi.. I satule you sir. Your stirring romantic write is incredible! Login to Reply

Lena Emp Date: 10/2/2018 1:20:00 PM This is so beautiful and so sweet, your love for someone is so imminent through your words I can feel it, looking for more. God bless. Login to Reply

Winged Warrior Date: 9/25/2018 2:19:00 PM Longing for love, brings out the best in us, Ravi...great write my friend...love & light...^WW^ Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 9/30/2018 2:56:00 AM Thanks for your valuable comment my dear friend. Very much appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/24/2018 12:35:00 AM - A deep and sad poem, Ravi - You've described your feelings so alive - Sorry, I have not been to "soup" lately ... I posted a poem yesterday - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 9/30/2018 2:57:00 AM Thanks for your valuable comment my dear friend. Very much appreciated. Hugs xxxx

Probir Gupta Date: 9/23/2018 11:12:00 PM Intense feeling looking at us in every line ... Beautiful write, romantically fine ... Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 9/30/2018 2:57:00 AM Thanks for your valuable comment my dear friend. Very much appreciated.

Pashang Salehi Date: 9/22/2018 9:14:00 PM Beautiful one indeed... Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 9/30/2018 2:58:00 AM Thanks for your valuable comment my dear friend. Very much appreciated.

Nette Onclaud Date: 9/18/2018 6:11:00 PM heartfelt read from your golden pen, ravi... this is a beauty!...huggs Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 9/30/2018 2:58:00 AM Thanks for your valuable comment my dear friend. Very much appreciated.

Vijay Pandit Date: 9/17/2018 5:50:00 PM The many ways you expressed love in your poem.. make quite an impact on the meaning of the word. Well done, Ravi. Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 9/30/2018 2:58:00 AM Thanks for your valuable comment my dear friend. Very much appreciated.

Paul Callus Date: 9/15/2018 11:57:00 AM Hi Ravi...you tackle love, absence and longing with a delightful pen, my friend. Best regards // paul Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 9/30/2018 2:58:00 AM Thanks for your valuable comment my dear friend. Very much appreciated.

Eve Roper Date: 9/14/2018 12:25:00 PM Nicely done, Ravi, so much emotion in your poem of loving hurt needing your love one near. Love brings life to everyone. Thank you for your loving condolence. Hugs eve Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 9/30/2018 2:58:00 AM Thanks for your valuable comment my dear friend. Very much appreciated.

Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/13/2018 8:52:00 PM This reminds me of the songs of Solomon. A masterful piece. Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 9/30/2018 2:58:00 AM Thanks for your valuable comment my dear friend. Very much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/13/2018 4:12:00 PM romantic one, Ravi. I enjoyed this. Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 9/30/2018 2:58:00 AM Thanks for your valuable comment my dear friend. Very much appreciated.

Charlie Smith Date: 9/13/2018 11:28:00 AM Truly a sad lament Ravi, well done... Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 9/30/2018 2:59:00 AM Thanks for your valuable comment my dear friend. Very much appreciated.

Joseph May Date: 9/13/2018 8:27:00 AM A poem of longing in the absence of a loved one..Nicely penned Ravi Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 9/30/2018 2:59:00 AM Thanks for your valuable comment my dear friend. Very much appreciated.

Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 9/13/2018 3:16:00 AM If we are not in Love, there will be no Life! Love is the motion that triggers the soul to rejoice in bliss.. Love is the essence of the soul's existence.. a wonderful Light Verse! A pleasure to read. Best regards. Be blessed always. Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 9/30/2018 2:59:00 AM Thanks for your valuable comment my dear friend. Very much appreciated.