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If Women If the earth floats through the universe borne on the back of a giant tortoise it surely must be female for the ride is smooth and silent and rarely falters. if women were the weaker sex evolution would have stopped in the warmth of primordial seas eve would have remained a rib god would not have had to invent her. if women were truly the weaker sex the earth would shriek with the accumulation of their pain.

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Date: 12/1/2017 12:44:00 AM
This is one is one of your best. It takes the breath away. A masterpiece.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 12/1/2017 6:01:00 PM
Thank you Jannie.
Date: 11/4/2017 9:53:00 AM
Very thought-provoking poem, Pat. I agree totally w/John F. A good mental muscle flexing poem. Keep on making us think ... think harder. Aurora bright poetry. Your pen shines again. Love and more love always.
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Date: 11/4/2017 6:59:00 AM
I have to readily agree with you on this one, Patricia. Men might be stronger and more aggressive...but woman are far tougher mentally. Men can learn to be tough (or act it...as most quite often do) woman are born tough! Therein lies the difference. Insightful little poem, Patricia...as always by you. :) john
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Date: 11/3/2017 5:31:00 AM
Oodles to add to the conversation but your pen says it all <3
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/3/2017 11:07:00 AM
I will gladly listen. Thanks sister of the pen.
Date: 11/2/2017 10:50:00 AM
uhm ... the reality of it all is ... there is no weaker sex ... what mind would you burdon ... how many tote sacks have been used ... how much information can you handle ... tell me ... who asks ... who is my mother ... surely not a box father ... nothing ever forgiven from a box ... pretty rocks best friend ... diamond dogs ... or what ...
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/2/2017 11:16:00 AM
When I grew up we were considered the weaker sex by all Patriarchy. This poem comes out of that era. Thank you for comment.
Date: 11/2/2017 9:38:00 AM
Women are very powerful, mentally and physically.. not the weaker sex at all.. Well expressed Patricia..
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/2/2017 10:35:00 AM
Silent One I thank you for your comment.
Date: 11/2/2017 6:50:00 AM
I agree--women are a symbol of strength and all that is good in this world--a unique creative thought!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/2/2017 10:34:00 AM
Thank you Vijay for your most encouraging comment.

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