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Line's Bitesize No180 Contest __ April 13, 2025

If Wishing Makes it So


If only my wishing could make it so,
I would humbly ask for just two things...
To touch a star and set its light aglow
and hear an angel's voice when it sings

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Duke Beaufort

April 17, 2025 at 9:19 AM

Lin, too cute. I think I would have asked for something else, but perhaps there's a lesson here. We can interpret the wish you describe as just about almost anything nice. The picture included is also inspiring. Smiles!!

Lin Lane

April 17, 2025 at 2:11 PM

Now, I'm going to have to wonder what you'd wish for. Smile at that! Thanks.

Tom Cunningham

April 13, 2025 at 9:37 PM

Short and sweet Lin, I hope your wish comes through. Good luck in the contest. Tom

Lin Lane

April 14, 2025 at 10:29 AM

pssttt... I didn't really make one. Thanks a lot, Tom.

Sand Blown

April 13, 2025 at 1:41 PM

good idea.......the star sings color-light ......len

Lin Lane

April 14, 2025 at 10:29 AM

Could be. Thanks, Len.

Jan Allison

April 13, 2025 at 12:49 PM

aww Lin this is so sweet - I'm not sure what i would ask for if granted two wishes! hugs jan xx

Lin Lane

April 14, 2025 at 10:28 AM

I don't know it would be if we only had one! Don't think we have to worry about the reality of that. Thanks, Jan.

Paula Goldsmith

April 13, 2025 at 11:27 AM

What a Lovely write with a great picture. I enjoyed reading this one. I would also love to make this wish for myself. "Good Luck" if for contest. Have a wonderful spring day.........

Lin Lane

April 14, 2025 at 10:28 AM

Thank you very much, Paula. We can share our wish.

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