If We

If we were a beach
then you would be the sand, diamond warmth,
and I the shingle underfoot.

If we were a pen
then I would be invisible ink,
and you a permanent marker, fluorescent.

If we were wine
you would be the vineyard, the grape, the wine list itself;
I a bottle unopened, left corked.

If we were a theatre
I am the playbill of a show cancelled and unseen;
you, the stage in spotlight: golden, applauded.

I the tile and you the whole mosaic
for us as a Roman floor;
I a shattered pane and you the handle
with us in the shape of a door.

As clothing – you a shiny button, me a thread to be snipped.
As hair – you a photographed trend, I a ponytail clipped.

If we were a couple,
Then you would be blind.
If our love was a tape,
I’d forever record, pause and rewind.

If we were a cake
you would be the fingertip licked icing
and I a batter filled lump.
If we were a body
then you would be the heart
and I the blood you pump.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Gauthier Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 8:31 AM
Awesome poem, Thomas. I clung to every word. A FAVE for me. Congrats on your most deserving win.
Harper Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 6:18 PM
Congratulations on your 6th place win in the contest, the end line was a zinger, very strong work. I also loved the play of metaphors to convey the love. Bravo
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 26, 2019 at 2:54 PM
This might be the King of metaphors Thomas. So very creative! Congratulations on your wonderful win!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 26, 2019 at 8:59 AM
I love the intimate feel of this piece. Thanks for entering my contest.
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